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|Reviewed by Donna Swanson
|I love this! That's the great thing about the new car keys. If I lose the van, I can just hit the panic button and broadcast to the whole mall where my car is parked! What a boon for us silver oldies!|
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|How many times have we all had such a frustration? Your style of charming our angst is not without appreciation, I'm sure. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Anita, this is witty and fun. Never happens to me. My truck is unique:)
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Enjoyed this very clever pen!|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|yes, do that Pat..mark it for easy spotting..i too have encountered this weary way but in search of my driver !!! He's good in 'disappearance acts' , now that i've given him a mobile......heeheee... Enjoyed this lovely write.. :)best wishes.neerja|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Funny, yes. and a little frightening. I may color my car gone. -gene.|
|Reviewed by Shay White
|Oh the perils of the parking lot! What fun poem and well written, thanks for sharing.|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
I'm with Amor...this is great -
written with humour and a light touch
and the point is well made, the anonymity,
sameness, conformity, death of the individual,
swallowed by corporate control.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Now that's a cute little write. I hear they have chrome paint now. That way your car would outshine the rest. ;-)
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|This is great...I love it...not that I ever get lost and unable to find my car but if they were all the same color? who knows!|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I'd go for the tye-dye look, it will rarely be copied...hope you didn't walk home...;-)e|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|amen to that!
be well, dear one!