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Tallied By It's Sum
by A PAX

Tuesday, October 18, 2011
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No one ever told me,
That tomorrow never comes
That void is balanced on the false
And tallied by it's sum

Pax
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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/7/2012
Nicely done; thought-inciting words, Anita. There is a typo in the word "it's" (it is). It should be "its" - the possessive. I make typos all the time and I appreciate it when they are pointed out to me so I can correct them. Thank you for sharing, Anita. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 10/31/2011
A clever poem, Anita. Hugs,
Sheila
Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/23/2011
Pax, this is a unique expression of the premise and I do enjoy it -- your sum is thought provoking as Karen states -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 10/20/2011
thought provoking!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 10/18/2011
Has a nice rhyme throughout its run, not to mention it's [it is] sum.

So I won't [will not].

Run [Ron]
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