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Walking the Child
by Christine Tsen

Tuesday, February 21, 2012
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This is a tribute to my father beloved whom I lost this past week.


Walking the Child 

 

Your flickering comfort is here with us

As we stride, he and I

Little Liam riding his bike, stopping now and again

Saying to you, “You would like it here, by golly!”

The geese, the stream

And me

Lost in my ruminations, your heaven within my earth

And his –

 

He hands me a stick to walk with

He has whittled its end

Like yours, he tells me,

“Like my Gramp’s, by golly!”

 

You’re living on in him, Dad

And in me

Always, always

In our pledges of pain, our laggard steps

Following in your own

Onward, we’re Grandpa’s team now!

Our great celebration for you inside

Where, as here, beavers have done their landscaping

You never know what you’ll mean to someone

A young boy, the masses

Until you’re gone –

 

Remember how your hand held mine

As we walked each day?

And I would reach to pet Meng’s kitty

Around and around merry go round stop sign

To your songs –

 

And then we’d listen for the tinkle-plop of a stone in the well

And under the magic pine tree we’d have tea

Eat a pine needle treat

Then around the corner we’d roll down the hill

Only to scramble back up and roll down again

And if it was muddy, we’d laugh

Off to the maple tree for a hat, a nose so sticky!

 

And then

I remember the melancholy was palpable

On the day, that day, I chose friends over you

A neighborhood boy capturing my attention

How suddenly I left you walking alone –

 

And now you, me

The onslaught of death, how I hurried home with prayers

Please God, don’t take my father!

Tears didn’t matter anymore, only our twinfire eyes

Daddy thank you, Dad of gentleness, how we miss you

Your spirit sings inside us, always the music

And for you, the dearest of applause.

 

 

 

©  2012 Christine Thomas Tsen.  All Rights Reserved

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Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 10/8/2012
This tribute to your dad brought tears to my eyes. I am so sorry for your great loss. May God keep you in his tender embrace...M
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley 5/22/2012
Beautiful Christine.

My father was such a man, I recall so many beautiful memories he left me. He would carry me around dancing when I was a wee little thing singing "My Bonnie Lies over the ocean" and a "Bicycle Built for Two" it is this gentleness that helps form us. All the inner strength to face the world and the love.

Beautifully written and lovely tribute to your father.

You have my empathy and compassion. Know he will always be ever near you.

Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante 5/3/2012
this deeply touched me, i'm so sorry for your loss.
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 4/22/2012
Heartrending and inspiring and stunningly well-written.

I am so sorry for your loss, Christine. He sounds like a wonderful
person.

As do you!!

He was -- and is -- extremely proud of you, I know.

Thank you so much for sharing this piece of your heart.

Love always, and Then,

Phyllis

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader) 4/5/2012
"Dad of gentleness," speaks galaxies.
Reviewed by Jon Willey 3/25/2012
Christine, in your celebration of your father's life will you find the path to reconciling his passing. He was obviously a fine father and you loved him immensely. "The greatest gift a man can be given is to be recalled often and lovingly, when he is no more". Accept my condolences my dear friend. I wish you peace love and great joy, Jon Michael
Reviewed by Ray Malcolm 3/22/2012
Beautiful poem Christine. I came to your profile after I read your comment on my own poem. Thank you very much. I feel your poem very deeply, and I hope one day my own son may appreciate me as you appreciate your father.

Yes, I am a musician, I have played the classical guitar for about 13 years. I see you play the cello, a wonderful instrument.

Thanks
Reviewed by Laura Fall 3/17/2012
Oh Christine , my sweet friend, I am so truly sorry for your loss and so upset that I missed this tender and dear tribute to your father as my heart truly goes out to you (Hugs) Again I am so sorry! Laura
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 3/8/2012
A deep loss that must be faced with threads of beautiful memorable moments...you leave him a tribute in those precious inumerable fragments that bring smiles and tears but never go by without notice of the Creator. I need not know him directly but through you I see the magic of his being come forth and you have made him proud.
Love, Amor
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/6/2012
I am sorry for your loss, Christine. Please accept my deepest sympathy. This is a moving, loving, and meaningful tribute to your father. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 3/6/2012
My heartfelt condolences, Christine. I recently lost my father and know the pain. This is an exquisite tribute, just beautifully done. Be well and hold tightly to the memories. ~Best, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Axilea MU 3/4/2012
Very moving, your words are carried by a very high energy in this poem, Christine. I am sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing the beautiful emotion and memory.

Axilea
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 3/2/2012
Beautifully sung, a song you will sing while walking in the steps of memories of your dear Dad...I am so sorry Christine, Hugs~
Christine
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 3/2/2012
I'm very sorry for your loss, Christine. I want to thank you for sharing this poem with us, too. I think this piece is spot-on in capturing the grieving process - the memories; the moments stilled in time that a person never forgets because they shaped and built foundations, the complex emotion.... Quit a poem. Thanks again for sharing it.
Sheila
Reviewed by Joy Hale 2/25/2012
I am so sorry to hear of your loss and your daddy's passing. He has left you only for a short time for you will meet again one day and pick up where you left off. A love this special is a rare gift from parent to child; savor the memories when the loss overcomes you for they will make his passing just a wee bit better for you troubled heart. A lovely, honest poem of love... so special for both of you.

Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by John Domino 2/25/2012
A wonderful tribute from a loving daughter. Al dads would love to be remembered as you remember your dad with love, compassion and kindness.
Reviewed by Cryssa C 2/24/2012
Christine, I am sorry to hear of your loss. A dear friend of mine once said that parents shouldn't die until their children are ready for them to, but then... would anyone ever die? But then the question must be asked, does anyone ever truly die? For they live on in memory in our hearts and souls... You have so aptly shown this through your poem. May you feel comfort in this time of sorrow, and be able to hold your memories close around you to bring you peace.

Cryssa
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 2/23/2012
Your spirit sings inside us, always the music
And for you, the dearest of applause.

such sweet sounds and sentiments will never fade, dear Christine. Like the rush of many waters, such applause will accompany your every fond thought, remembrance and yes, his life that goes on in and around your doting family and friends. You have so been on my mind and in my prayers. As always you do and bear such sorrow with piquant grace and opulent, luminous natural beauty. Be well and gentle with yourself and each other. Love always, Kate xx

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 2/23/2012
Sharing the love from your poem
*Christine* go to center stage,
take your bow, music now playing
"Your Daddy of Rose Heart" always
in bloom..bouquets side by side!!!

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Janna Hill 2/23/2012
Be comforted sweet Christine. Though I never knew the wonderful man you describe I read your words and cry with you.
Janna
Reviewed by jude forese 2/22/2012
sorry to hear for your loss ... my words are but dust but my spirit is with you ... he was a handsome man and a great Dad ...
Reviewed by JMS Bell 2/22/2012
Christine...I am so sorry to hear of your loss. You have my heartfelt condolences. May God strengthen you and yours in this so difficult time. A tribute so touching and beautiful. Love, blessings and faith...Joyce * His Inspirations
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 2/22/2012
Tearfully read. No longer one of those World War II heroes, soon to be gone. He will remain your memory forever.

Ron
Reviewed by Frank Stein (Reader) 2/22/2012
Oh my, this is so beautiful..
Reviewed by D. Vegas 2/22/2012
Christine, Sorry for the loss of your father...a wonderful tribute to your father.

Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by richard cederberg 2/22/2012
That you can express so poignantly (these feelings) is a testament to the inner strength that comes to some ^from above^ when they have to navigate through the labyrinths of loss. Beautiful sentiment, wonderful memories, CT. My heartfelt commiserations. May each day bring deeper understanding and a lasting peace to you. all the best ... richard
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 2/22/2012
I lost mine in 2005 and every so often I'll reach for the phone on a Sunday to call him....just like I always did...and then I remember. This is such a sweet expression of the true sorrow I know you are feeling. My deepest sympathy to you. With love, Patrick
Reviewed by Richard Goodship 2/22/2012
A beautiful tribute to your father Christine.
Seems more and more we've reached that moment in time when we are saying goodbye more than hello.
This week I have found myself with the task of preparing a eulogy for a dear friend. She's been diagnosed with cancer and not given much time to live. I only hope that I can find such words as yours.

Richard
Reviewed by Douglas Bentley 2/22/2012
Now I know why I haven't seen nor heard from you.
I will pray for you.
Call on me - if there is anything I can do.
For the hardest part may still be in front of you.
Comfort and grace may it fill you.

Doug
Reviewed by Richard King 2/22/2012
May peace be with you Christine.

The loss of a loved one is truly a difficult pill to swallow, but this is a lovely tribute to your Daddy. May he rest in peace.

Dick
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 2/22/2012
Grace and love abound in this lovely tribute to your dad.
Songs and lighthearted memories ever present. I am so sorry
for your loss Christine. Blessings to you and your family.
Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 2/22/2012
I am so terribly sorry for your loss sweet lady....Both your love for your precious father, and your pain at the loss of such a blessing in your life resonates in your beautifully crafted phrases! I truly understand....

Hugs
Anna
Reviewed by Paul Berube 2/22/2012
So sorry for your lost, Christine. But, you've kept him ever alive in this beautifully done tribute. God bless.
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 2/22/2012
well said
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 2/22/2012
Christine,

This is a wonderful,and heartbreaking tribute to your father. I'm sure he was a wonderful man. I'm sorry for your loss.

Mary
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 2/22/2012
Truly heartfelt Christine, and truly good. May his spirit sing inside you forever.
Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen 2/22/2012
Such a beautiful testament of sincerity, and the uplifting example of life carrying on through children. Also your work here and on other pieces show cases your loving relationships with family. I myself never experienced such union, but hold your experiences dear to me. Thanks Christine.
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 2/21/2012
How sadly beautiful, Christine. Words that run as music. Lovely, lovely tribute to the memories of your father, lovely, lovely tribute to your father. So sorry that you lost him.
Mark
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 2/21/2012
Christine, Oh dear, so sorry to hear of your loss. I can see you were like him..your music is so special my sweet friend, it will have both your mother and father's energy within it. Find peace my dear lovely friend, and know you are loved and thought of each day..I love you...

Peace love and angel light,
Amber
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE 2/21/2012
yes, yes... *and for you the dearest of applauses*... the beauty of loveliness broken by love and still lovelier than lovely... my condolences to you and your family on this grievous loss... stay strong, because as your poem attests to, he's still with you and within you as your memory of him remains intact...

This is a tender, heartfelt tribute to your father.
Roger
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 2/21/2012
This brought a lump into my throat, Christine, and a damn misting of my eyes by the time I finished this sad, but wonderful tribute to your father. I grieve with you for him who was loved. God bless you, my friend.
Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks 2/21/2012
So, so beautiful. I don't thing I have read anything so beautiful in my life.
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 2/21/2012
So sorry Christine.....well written...see you soon.



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