A poem about enjoying life through the sights and sounds of the world and also, enjoying romance and solidifying that bond for all of eternity.
Photo -- © 2005, Jill Eisnaugle
Let us go before the daylight
Falls into the crystal sea
And revel within the delight
Of all that this world can be
Let us breathe the stirring figments
That caress the life within
As the landscapes’ wondrous pigments
Paint themselves upon the skin.
Let us go before the stars come
To the fields where children play
And see all that we can become
When our love shows us the way
Let us feel the moonbeams’ pleasure
Permeate the evening sky
With beauty nothing could measure
Beyond the most sacred sigh.
Let us go before the sunrise
To the river by the wood
And, at last, with hope in our eyes
Join our hearts, as just we could
This pathway, so long neglected
May not be without its bends
But, we’ll scale the unexpected
As lifelong lovers and friends.
© 2005 – Jill Eisnaugle’s Poetry Collection
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|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Could be read at weddings...
|Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
|Let us go together, indeed, lest all be lost. Excellent, Pierre|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This is amazing as are all your writes, Jill. Content is perfection and of course the form is always flawless. This is a truly delightful ode to romance.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Magical write..And perfect form...|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Stunning picture, Jill, and a beautiful write to match the glories of the sunrise. :) BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|This is truly incredible. A superb write Jill. It is a keeper.
Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Beautiful writing that is a pleasure to read.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Absolutely magnificent poetry!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Beautiful write, Jill! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D