|Reviewed by Barbara Henry
|Simply beautiful,Jill,and it is tremendously encouraging.
I especially like this: "But soon, she will realize her craft
Is docked within her heart
Her fortitude is her life raft
From which she will not depart.
Thanks so much for sharing,and continued success
Barbara J Henry
|Reviewed by Jeremy Teoh
|This one reminds me of many things I used to dream of. Smooth writting.|
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Good writing, makes me bring back my cruise in 1997 to the Caribbean. Was nice sailing and I enjoyed the jacuzzi very much and the pool. Everyone was one happy family. wish I could go sailing today, but can't. Loved this poem.|
|Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
|Sometimes we could all use a boat, for different reason. well penned.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A boat to faraway places with strange sounding names.
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|very nicely done.....
felt strength here
|Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines
|Nicely rhymed and penned. Yep, sometimes I need a boat.
Good one, Jill!
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Our strength is our shield. Well said.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Loved it, felt like that occasionally when lifes storms come hard! Great write enjoyed it much!
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Come, and sail away with me to another time and day; to a place of peace and tranquility poetess on the winds of time!Love Holly|
|Reviewed by Michael Mathieu
|Feeling comfortable within ones self and changes never occuring,you tend to dream of maybe somewhere things are better and no problems
abound.Excellent decription and flow,
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
A beautiful write here
|Reviewed by Lew Duffey
|Don't we all at one time or another wish for that seperation from lifes pressures and woes. This is a wonderful reminder that if we are looking anywhere but in our heart we stand little chance of finding it.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
You and I on the same page, today...wishing we could just get away.......you capture the pain of life, and the hope we have in just hanging on, perfectly. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Excellent writing as usual from you; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D