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  I walk the Woodland Dunes
by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley
Thursday, September 04, 2014
Rated "G" by the Author.

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I follow the footsteps of what once was... ~Lily of Lough Neagh~


I walk the Woodland Dunes
with every step I take
to trace footsteps once was
A mark love she did make


But I am now no more
a fantasy of mind
a whisper in the wind
a fantasy his time


I walk the forest deep
Re-tracing both our steps
Remembering what was
A promise never kept


He said he'd never go
but it was just a lie
for faith he just had lost
he found another spry


I was just the tween one
'til another did arrive
now walking the road alone
his faith did surely die


Yet unbeknown to him
he killed my beating heart
All I do is forgive
O'lady do not start


I wish him all the best
Yet he'll never find another me
Because I was his soul
He'll make due with what he sees


Carol K. Dennis-Woosley
September 4, 2014




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Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams 11/9/2014
I think this poem retraces the steps of many, not just the two...such beautifully told journey of memory and coming, perhaps sadly, to terms with such loss and betrayal. Promises broken leave scars as real as any. Many blessings to you lovely lady.
Be well,
Kathy
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 10/6/2014
~Carol
A whisper in the wind for faith will surely guide you.
Deeply emotional poetry.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 9/21/2014
Such an aching sadness here, Lily, and a beautiful tale of a story too-often told that is a part of life's fabric for too many. We can feel the heaviness with every step - dunes and woodland conjure heavy-underfoot with entanglement of mind, body, spirit. It's very painful when such a union falters for whatever reason - especially hard when it's because of unfathomable 'change' of personhood or reason in the other. Wishing health, healing and protection in the journey onwards in what can, at times, seem a harsh and brutal reality. xx
Reviewed by Teresa Walker 9/18/2014
Oh dear friend this is beautiful and felt to my inner being.
..His loss your gain ...don't deserve pain..beauty as yours..deserves a good man...keep your faith...I am a praying fan...

I love you dear friend!
Teresa
Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather 9/8/2014
Your poetic voice always makes the heart sigh, it's as if he is in a magic forest where a spell so dark has been cast, it will take everything from him and only his true love can save him . But if she tries , she too will suffer more and the outcome is most uncertain. This is a love poem from start to finish. Bravo. ( and if it's personal, oh, that fool)
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/5/2014
Why do I feel a whole lot of guilt landing on me as I read your meaningful verses, Carol? It does not change anything... ...but it hurts. Love and best wishes always,

Regis
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 9/5/2014
I'm so glad you are posting again. Be at peace, girl.

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/5/2014
Beautiful graphic, extremely sad piece.
Reviewed by D. Vaineo 9/4/2014
This reminds me of that saying, you don't know
what you had until it is gone and you are right
he will never find another you. He didn't deserve
you!

Love,

Deborah
Reviewed by Diana Wiles 9/4/2014
Your words are Enchanting yet haunting..
The overall effect one of melancholy beauty...
Sending love,
Diana...
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/4/2014
So good to see you posting again. Even if your post seems quite bleak. May your happiness return soon.

Ron
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 9/4/2014
Very Happy, Ms. Carol, to see you posting again and what a posting...beautiful write and more beautiful picture...I've never seen, in person, a real owl, probably because they only come out at night and with regards the woods I am far away from them in the night...keep writing young lady...-e-

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