|Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
|What a beautiful way to capture the tenderness and texture of a kiss one to the other
|Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader)
|This is lovely Lily, how sweet the way you describe the touch of lips
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Nice blend of innocence and sensuality!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing this lovely offering that awakens the emotions, Lily. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|They brush my cheek caress my soul
Warmth doth draw me in their folds
..am saving this one..thank you Carolee!
|Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
|What an exquisite way to describe the tenderness and warmth of a kiss Lily|
|Reviewed by John Domino
|This is so delightful that I can actually smell the roses.|
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|I am more fond of roses than any other flower. So much beauty, soft, fragrent delicate and still with thorns. You make me want to kiss a rose.
Stay well and keep writing
|Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)
|My dear lady how eloquently you surmise the loveliness and beauty of a kiss. How enchanting the tenderness you evoke.
I bow to you with tipped hat
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|You capture the essence, delightfully!
|Reviewed by Asa Seeley
|this took me there and i don't read too many of these...you understand why(smile). thanks for the share
|Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
|How sweet Carolee, all of life's sorrows and beautiful joys can be witnessed in any individual thing that lives. And this velvet petal lives in your being, covering the shape of your heart, and laid out like blankets on the beaches of your soul.
|Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
|Poetry in its purest form. It tastes sweet as honey, it even sticks to your palate. Pure enjoyment !!!
Beautiful work Carolee
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Carolee, Very beautiful and erotic...
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
If you could see here it is a standing ovation.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton