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Candle Glow
by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley
Thursday, June 28, 2012
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Love is a River
Drink from it
~ Rumi ~

Candle glow

Candle light warmly how it doth glow
Releasing soft essences while ere she flows
Softness and warmth it sheds ere soft light
Caressing souls throughout the night

Hues of pink, orange and softness of white
Upon your face it casts tender light
Across our bodies details the night
Surrendering our souls in lovers plight

Every contour the shadow is cast
Warmth inviting two lovers’ contrast
As water flows from waterfalls path
Liquefying fluidly another recast

Trace with a finger the form be as one
Our shadow veiled nary undone
Borealis of light crosses our form
Resonance of colors bodies conform

Simple o’ candle the light which doth glow
Caressing two bodies for now they have grown
Unto each other a oneness to be
Nary to part nary eternity

Carolee Dennis-Woosley
June 28, 2012

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/16/2014
As I have stated before, the use of "Old English" is not my preferred genre in poetry. However, there is no denying the mood which you have recalled, recreated, and shared through your verses here. Thank you for sharing, Carol. Love and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader) 9/13/2012
What a wonderful sensuous poem for two lovers

Reviewed by Ed J. 7/1/2012
You describe well the beauty of light and love here. A candles light and warmth will always be seen and felt in a mystical. Love is the strongest light of all. I enjoyed this wonderful poem.

Stay well and keep writing
Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader) 6/30/2012
You must be deeply in love to write so beautiful about it, every time again. This is how love is supposed to be, tender, romantic, beautiful.

Thanks Carolee, you fill my heart with warmth
Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader) 6/30/2012
Everything you write Lily is beautiful. You have a knack for describing such romantic moments. I can see through your writing as though I am there with someone I love.

I love this!

Reviewed by Shirley Houston 6/29/2012
I absolutely LOVE this write. Romance in its purity is so beautiful!!
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 6/28/2012
This is so beautiful and so deeply romantic! As the wax from the candle flows so does the love.

Love ya!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack 6/28/2012
Many a statement expressed,
Nothing more can I add,
But this you might have guessed,
But now I need a cold shower,
You have done so much to me with this write,
I find myself naked and full of stress...e
Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen 6/28/2012
Beautiful Carolee, such special moments painted on their bodies by the candle's glow
So sensual are the contours under its magestic illusions. and their souls then take on the shape and color of passion.
Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader) 6/28/2012
My beautiful Lily, so eloquently and descriptively you write of two lovers and the romance the candle brings to you both. Again, and agreeing with Budd what more can one say. Keep writing Lady Lily

I bow and tip my hat to you

Reviewed by Budd Nelson 6/28/2012
What more could I say That those before me have not said to this lovely piece. We all are left waiting for your next one. You have a wonderful talent, allow us the pleasure of reading it.
Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader) 6/28/2012
Just because I'm older, it doesn't mean I still can't see. You have a wonderful imagination Lily. Tender romantic moments with someone you love. How I miss those!

Reviewed by D. Vegas 6/28/2012
Candle light is romance for sure and is also intense and erotic...favorite 2 lines- " Softness and warmth it sheds
ere soft light Caressing souls throughout the night "
Beautiful images you give us, Lily!

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 6/28/2012
Loveliest of warm romantic light glow in oneness to be.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader) 6/28/2012
This is so beautiful Lily, everything you write is beautiful about love. To describe how you both become one soul and never to part. My girlfriend loves your poetry too. Please write more!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 6/28/2012
The candle shines it light on the budding romance and continued it soft love light as that love blossomed and grew. Very descriptive and romantic, Carol.
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