|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A beautiful dream without a doubt; thank you for sharing it, Carol. Love and all good things to you,
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|The moors surreal beckoning
from your hauting lines for
love to be in its mist....
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|You have a knack for love...e|
|Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
|Willowing dance of bewitching words in these lines. Just the word 'perfume' is pretty compellingly sensational when paired with lilac and lavendar. Your subject matter and vocabulary choices make for lavishly woven material and read like drawing a silk scarf across one's neck....or a feather across one's cheek. Leaving off with "...you are there" is a striking close. Enjoyed this very much. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
|A beautiful enchanting vision. Mystical and romantic at the same time.
Only the other half of your soul can be delivered this way.
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|such a lyrical mystic pice of perfectly written visions on the mist, i hope the delivered appreciates it as much
|Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
|Enchantingly beautiful, love at its finest of moments, deep and caring.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|You caught me, naked, though clothed in love, where time stands still.
|Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
|What an awesome poem Lilly, like your standing there at the edge waiting for someone to be delivered to you. Someone you love and are waiting for! AWESOME
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Very flowing poetry, Carol...makes you feel like you are in the mist
|Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)
|Beautiful that's what I can say just beautiful!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Through the dawning of the trees,
A soft laid design of the tryst,
Kiss the dew it will have its way,
Upon our souls love will weigh.
|Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)
|Dear lady Lily, you bring enchantment to the receiver of these beautiful prose. For who could be so eternally blessed to be brought to you dear Lady. A wonderful write!
I bow and tip my hat to you
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Rather mysterious and drawing! Love it!
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|One of your best yet. Share the mist with those who can feel it's beauty and love. I really love this one.
Stay well and keep writing