|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|May you always have "Grains of Sand"
plentiful in your life *Carolee*
thanks for your poem of substance
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|I'VE SEEN THIS DONE AT A WEDDING. BEAUTIFUL DECLARATION OF THE COUPLE'S COMMITMENT TO ONE ANOTHER AND TO THEIR LOVE AND THE SOLIDIFYING OF TWO LIVES INTO ONE. A WONDERFUL SHARING, LILY...THANK YOU. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|I like the music of this one; it read for me like a 'spell' and that made it curiously in need of repeating. My favorite line is "Love beheld sees how they land." Seeing how they land.....I really like that. Goood one! ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Everything we create in life truly needs a sound foundation.|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|All it takes is that one grain of sand which to you seems like a boulder!
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|well written, heartfelt poem, Lily
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|Beautiful... :) best wishes,neerja|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|as always, beautiful love poem.|
|Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
|You always know how to speak love Lilly, my wife and I forever build a strong foundation.
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Beautiful layering of sands gathering for a foundation
of a lifetime to evermore love. A curtsey my Lady for
such a beautiful love poem.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
|You know how to build a beautiful foundation, one which is essential.
|Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)
|Dear lady Lily your romantic pen of love to paper always reflects the importance of love's relationships.
I bow and tip my hat to you
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|what an everlasting endeavour two such in love starting a castle of love one grain of sand at a time together, beautifully thought and excellently penned, your gift is in your words
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|I am a builder, well sort of. Looks like beach time, lots of sand there. All things start as a single element and grow to wharever you make of it. Some things last beyond a lifetime once created. Catles of love are ommortal. Wondeful write.
Stay well and keep writing
|Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)
|Beautiful Carolee, it takes working together and once the foundation is built it will last a lifetime
|Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
|Beautifully penned ... I loved the picture too ...|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Ah, Adriaen said it for me and said it better than I would have. Grains of sand are the cornerstone to the castle that love builds. Without the grains of sand combining and supporting each other, there can be no love.|
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Carol, One by one in whatever we endeaver...it starts
out slowly, but remember each of us still are still
individuals and need our own space.
Beautiful as always!
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|All the single grains of sand, build to a strong and solid foundation for your love. What a beautiful base to start with.
"Build with me please if you dare
My sweet prince with princess fair"
I dare !!!!