|Reviewed by Ed J.
|My first exchange was glorious. she stood in her yard as I drove up. Her hands , resting in her blue jean back pockets, a white top with a blue print pattern. A smile that lit up the world as I approached. The most beautiful woman on earth she is. You have a talent for stating emotions graciously.
Stay well and keep writing
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The same thing happened to me. There I was, all alone and trying not to stare, when Brad Pitt gave me that shy little glance… I was immediately smitten! Never mind. ;-)
Your poem evokes something that often happens in public places. Too bad most of us are shy to break the ice.
|Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
|Everyone has said what I would express, but this is a wonderful way to meet and hopefully learn about someone. Innocent and charming.
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|An Enchanting write written so wonderfully Laura|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|First Exchanges can truly be marvelous, but they can also be disastrous!|
|Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
|I met my wife in college at the campus bookstore. We knew the first time we met Lilly. I think everyone here has a similar story.
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|So very exciting just as
You have captured..attraction
at its best *Carolee*
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|what a wonderfully penned piece of that initial encounter between two completely unknowns, do they attract or ....
|Reviewed by luka tomlinson
|ahh, to the crux of all things anew, this felt like spring, nicely conveyed.|
|Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)
|Dear lady Lily, if there is anyone who knows romance this is you.
I bow and tip my hat to you
|Reviewed by Keith Rowley
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|Lily, you must have been in the bookstore where I met my husband 13 years ago. It was exactly like that. You captured the uncanniness of such an encounter superbly. Maybe this has happened to you? Good choice of Claire and Brad in "Meet Joe Black." Enjoyable page to read today. Thank you ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)
|There is something about the excitement when two meet for the first time. Even if they have not been properly introduced, the "eyes" have it :)
Great as always
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|There's nothing like that first rush, wondering what he thinks but yet knowing he's interested. Pheromone city!
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|When I think of all the people that I have met in my life, each one
left me with something. Either a friendship, a piece of advice, a sharing of sorts...which is still true to this day. Thank You, Carol
|Reviewed by Teresa Walker
|After, "the exchange", brought, Love Smiles and Love Hunger, my eyes, mind, and soul are creating the story for these two. Elizabeth Barrett Browing said it all, How do I love thee, let me count the ways...I love thee with a love I seemed to lose...
I like the way you bring other authors to write the feeling you express!
Well done, my flower of a friend, your petals are moving the wind!
|Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti
|Italians call it The Thunderbolt.|
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|And many times we will never know the reason why we are brought together.
These first moments can be so fragile, but they can be of influence for the rest of our lifes.
Beautiful reflected Carolee
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|. . . her coloring of the cheeks was the first shot launched . . . him moving a little closer toward her was the second launched shot . . . the rest is left up to fate . . .|