|Reviewed by Ed J.
|Nature has it's own appeal and beauty to itself. You combine nature and human relations quite nicely here.
Stay well and keep writing
|Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
|You capture the beauty of nature and romance here Lilly.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Love doesn't come any better…
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Finding Love in all the
right places *Carolee*
where nature abounds in
such lovely poetry
|Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)
|Dear lady Lily, this scene reminds me of my childhood. The smells, the farm, running barefoot through the grass. Thank you for this wonderful journey.
I bow and tip my hat to you
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|Very romantic, calming... Best wishes :) neerja|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|Ah! Let him be "held up"!! And, oh! The romance of waiting for the one you love!!
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Charming photo to go along with this outstanding write laura|
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|You've touched many people already with this writing. Me included. Your work continually reminds others of what is in front of our faces: sun. outside. looking. Thank you, Lily. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)
|Carol what an awesome story of a poem, it's like I am there feeling it myself.
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|this is a write to be reread many times in the future by many for sure. you see the beauty in so many things and bring them to us expertly
|Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
|What a stunning breathtaking poem Carolee this one was felt for sure.
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|You're surrounded with beauty and romance.
Especially the last verse is so very beautiful.
And in the distance there you are
my whisper of a thrill
my smile broadens
as you approach slowly and take my hand
Sigh........... so beautiful Carolee
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Such a beautiful, descriptive piece, Carol. We like to say that we could feel every line, sometimes whether we did or not. In this case I felt each line of verse and could feel the summer's warmth, the barefooted walk through the grass, all of it, even down to the "whisper of a thrill," or was that a loon's greeting that I heard, not wanting to intrude on your intimacy? This just was first rate from get-go to get-down.|
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Carol, You see beauty in everything you see...