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Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley

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  A place for us
by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley
Monday, September 10, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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There is something to be said when you can bare your soul naked to someone and they love you more. It's called acceptance. ~Lily of Lough Neagh~

 A place for us


There is a place for us
that no one else can enter.
It is a place that holds no secrets,
only beauty, peace, understanding

A place that we come to,
thinking we are one,
only to have our souls
fused together for a moment

And in that moment, I know you;
every pore, every pulse,
every thought, every fear.
And I love you more.

I feel myself laid bare before you,
and I feel content . . .
joyous that you are with me,
loving me in my nakedness

This place can only be entered through love
as love appears in its purist existence
you will automatically get there
that’s why no one else can enter

As love appears in its purist existence
all irregularities disappear
until only beauty and peace remains
even place and time don’t exist any longer

What is nakedness if there is pure love
What is time if there is pure love
what is place if there is pure love
Pure love will be the final unity of two beings into one


Carolee Dennis-Woosley
September 3, 2010

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/29/2012
I know this kind of love; the tragedy is when one finds out that the "other" is unable to reciprocate such uninhibited and expressive love. Thank you, Carol. Love and best wishes,

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 9/11/2012
Oh, Joyous! the Fusion of Two...
*Carolee* you have culminated all
the right reasons....

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Ed J. 9/11/2012
I visit just such a place often and wait until it becomes more real in my life situation.

Stay well and keep writing

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader) 9/11/2012
I second Deborah's comment --one, if not the, finest in your gallery. The 'genuine' glints off the page and has the look of total confidence that once in a while you see in someone's face. It is very effective how many appearances the word 'pure' has in your last stanza; and is that ever a perfect word 'pure' for what you have written before it. In the second stanza, second line, I found myself wanting your word "thinking" to be "feeling," because thinking doesn't seem part of all the magic within this elevated state-of-being poem. Gail Delaney says my feelings, too, that I've not heard this described so well anywhere, including any of my journals. ~~ Diana
Reviewed by Laura Fall 9/11/2012
Oh my this sure is beautifully written poetry Laura
Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader) 9/10/2012
Your understanding of love is wonderful, and the way it should be Lily. Another beautiful poem.

Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader) 9/10/2012
What can I say Lilly you nailed it on the head, that's love!

Reviewed by Budd Nelson 9/10/2012
a stunning and beautiful write of full filled love Lily
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/10/2012
Throughout the poem, I kept thinking of the words from a famous song: “There is a place for us… A time and place for us…” With its longing lyrics of what seemed like it would never be.

On the contrary, your poem speaks of fulfillment from pure love. So I was having a little bit of cognitive dissonance while reading.

Reviewed by Carolyn Dye 9/10/2012
I love this so much it rings so true to the love I've been blessed to find, please keep writing and sharing your gift. thank you for thispoem
Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader) 9/10/2012
Dear lady Lily, for love has not been described more beautifully as you have penned it here.

I bow and tip my hat to you

Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) 9/10/2012
This is the ultimate expression of love between two souls when even place and time don't exist any longer.
What is nakedness, what is time, what is place if there is pure love.
This is love in its purest existence.

Wonderful Carolee
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 9/10/2012
Lily ~
Exquisit in the lovliest beauty and peace.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti 9/10/2012
Lily, have you thought about writing anniversary cards for Hallmark?
Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader) 9/10/2012
This is the most beautiful testimony I have ever seen regarding love. Breathtaking and soul grabbing. Just beautiful Carol

Reviewed by D. Vaineo 9/10/2012
WoW,Carol!! One of your finest, Best and most Beautiful of ALL!!

Reviewed by neerja gandhi 9/10/2012
Well, great, something to ponder upon .. Nice write :) best wishes,neerja
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 9/10/2012
"..all irrgularities disappear.." It doesn't get any more pure than this! Time and place disappear. What a beautiful state of mind to be in!

Love ya!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 9/10/2012
You have given us a mental picture of true love and you have done it masterfully. When true love enters into your heart and soul it replaces fears and doubts, and gives you true love, which is the most wonderful, most misunderstood feeling in the universe.

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