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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/29/2012 |
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I know this kind of love; the tragedy is when one finds out that the "other" is unable to reciprocate such uninhibited and expressive love. Thank you, Carol. Love and best wishes,
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
9/11/2012 |
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Oh, Joyous! the Fusion of Two...
*Carolee* you have culminated all
the right reasons....
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
9/11/2012 |
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I visit just such a place often and wait until it becomes more real in my life situation.
Stay well and keep writing
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
9/11/2012 |
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| I second Deborah's comment --one, if not the, finest in your gallery. The 'genuine' glints off the page and has the look of total confidence that once in a while you see in someone's face. It is very effective how many appearances the word 'pure' has in your last stanza; and is that ever a perfect word 'pure' for what you have written before it. In the second stanza, second line, I found myself wanting your word "thinking" to be "feeling," because thinking doesn't seem part of all the magic within this elevated state-of-being poem. Gail Delaney says my feelings, too, that I've not heard this described so well anywhere, including any of my journals. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
9/11/2012 |
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| Oh my this sure is beautifully written poetry Laura |
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| Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader) |
9/10/2012 |
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Your understanding of love is wonderful, and the way it should be Lily. Another beautiful poem.
Di |
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| Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader) |
9/10/2012 |
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What can I say Lilly you nailed it on the head, that's love!
Mark |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
9/10/2012 |
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a stunning and beautiful write of full filled love Lily
budd |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/10/2012 |
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Throughout the poem, I kept thinking of the words from a famous song: “There is a place for us… A time and place for us…” With its longing lyrics of what seemed like it would never be.
On the contrary, your poem speaks of fulfillment from pure love. So I was having a little bit of cognitive dissonance while reading.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Dye |
9/10/2012 |
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| I love this so much it rings so true to the love I've been blessed to find, please keep writing and sharing your gift. thank you for thispoem |
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| Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader) |
9/10/2012 |
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Dear lady Lily, for love has not been described more beautifully as you have penned it here.
I bow and tip my hat to you
Cyrano |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
9/10/2012 |
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This is the ultimate expression of love between two souls when even place and time don't exist any longer.
What is nakedness, what is time, what is place if there is pure love.
This is love in its purest existence.
Wonderful Carolee |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
9/10/2012 |
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Lily ~
Exquisit in the lovliest beauty and peace.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti |
9/10/2012 |
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| Lily, have you thought about writing anniversary cards for Hallmark? |
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| Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader) |
9/10/2012 |
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This is the most beautiful testimony I have ever seen regarding love. Breathtaking and soul grabbing. Just beautiful Carol
Gail |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
9/10/2012 |
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WoW,Carol!! One of your finest, Best and most Beautiful of ALL!!
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
9/10/2012 |
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| Well, great, something to ponder upon .. Nice write :) best wishes,neerja |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
9/10/2012 |
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"..all irrgularities disappear.." It doesn't get any more pure than this! Time and place disappear. What a beautiful state of mind to be in!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/10/2012 |
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| You have given us a mental picture of true love and you have done it masterfully. When true love enters into your heart and soul it replaces fears and doubts, and gives you true love, which is the most wonderful, most misunderstood feeling in the universe. |
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