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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/25/2012 |
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I can relate to this completely although I do not understand why "love" seems to be so will o' the wisp like. I think you'll know what I mean. I am confused at times since I am greatly romantic, passionate and I don't worry much about what the "world" and "society" think. Thank you, Carol. Love and best wishes to you,
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| Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader) |
10/2/2012 |
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Better to remember the good times Lilly and forget the bad, that's what I say. Great painful write but looks like moving forward
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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
9/30/2012 |
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Poignantly, heartbreakingly sad, but with an outlook of hope on the horizon. Great write, Lily.
Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/30/2012 |
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| you've captured a very delicate moment ... |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/30/2012 |
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Understanding is the first step to forgiveness. Starting out with understanding can avoid conflict altogether. Your poem has a sense of longing that you haven't quite resolved.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
9/29/2012 |
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Beautiful understanding of what
was not to be *Carolee* by a
trickling tear of release..
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader) |
9/29/2012 |
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My dear Lady Lily, life can be painful, but if for the best then the right choice was made. Again you show us your diversity between love and broken relationships very well.
I bow and tip my hat to you
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
9/29/2012 |
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| Bittersweet lessons are being learned in this poem, and I agree with Diana. Understanding is an optomistic word. Sometimes when 'in this life there does come change'it is exciting and fresh. This time I think, not so much. But an opportunity just the same, to grow and value life. Be well, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
9/29/2012 |
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| I like the symbol of a blue stone residing where love brought it. I am thinking the fourth line in the second stanza has a glitch and perhaps was meant to be "for things which did not come," ? In stanza five, I like the rising sun calming a trembling hand. That line gives rededming qualities. This poem carries a tenderness that ends the piece with "understand," a very optomistic word. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
9/29/2012 |
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It's good to remember the good times.
Love ya!
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
9/29/2012 |
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Carol, I know that one learns from heartbreaks and yes, remembering
the sweet things that occurred. A wise comment. Thanks-
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader) |
9/29/2012 |
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Everyone should reflect only on the good things, and disregard the unpleasant and move forward. I like your quote there is wisdom in it
Di |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
9/29/2012 |
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momentos give us pause to reflect on the good of what was, very emotional and well written Carolee
budd |
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| Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader) |
9/29/2012 |
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This is something I also had to do, and don't look back. A wonderful emotional writing Carolee
Gail |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
9/29/2012 |
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It's wonderful to keep a memento for all the beautiful precious moments there once were.
Let the sharp edges of the pain be softened with the remembrances this blue stone gives you.
Despite the pain, very beautiful Carolee |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/29/2012 |
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| Leaving precious mementos which will soothe the hurts and ease the pain of someone who has chosen to leave. I see the strength in each and every line that was written. Excellent! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/29/2012 |
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Full Circle...Oh, how I can feel each word like a knife..beautiful sentiments that rock the sea with such a calm~ crazy huh?
Christine |
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