|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|TOTALLY CAPTURED....SOUNDS BEAUTIFUL...I HOPE IT IS. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|The rawness of passion's truth. The need to simply indulge the desire and not have weird consequences attached; a love to completeness and ending. Great show of spirited passion, yet, so, with a rawness that feeds a clear understanding.|
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Very well achieved, David|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Just. plain. great.
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|The eyes have it and tell all! You write knowing it.... thank you for sharing... =)
|Reviewed by Richard King
|David, I've been traveling for a spell and just now beginning to catch up. Your last 4 posts are absolutely outstanding. I've been reading your work for a while, but you've really hooked me now. Thanks Dick|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Rich and compelling as dark chocolate, David, and with the touch of its bittersweet sensuality and its power.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|I am not sure if you realize...but this is really seductive
the allurements of passion inside these lines are fire David.
laying scattered at someones feet &
not being able to see enough of them!
The lines are desire & passions all the way...
also: "Don't hurt me, marry me, bury me" WOW!!
Realizations Gifting Bow
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
What a very romantic poem for the woman who is the inspiration for it.
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|She is but a fool to let you go...but David trying to force something only stagnates it..Just manifest it, and let it go, let the Universe handle the outcome..it will be what it is suppose to be..You are a beautiful soul, don't ever forget it..
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|This interesting poem gives that "special person" a look at your inner soul. It also leaves you vulnerable.........! A lucky lady to be cared for this much.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|David, this is so beautiful and pain filled...it's as though the reader can see into your soul.|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|a very impressive poem of abandonment to the power of attraction. much enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|What woman could resist a proposal like that? How romantic and blunt I might add....giggle.....loved it, David!
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|I love your poem --
This is brazen and intense, dark and beautiful ~