|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|the ring of heartfelt truth.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Harsh, real, honest and thus very compelling, David. Love, peace, and healing to you,
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|IN THIS LIFE...WE ALL DO 'THINGS' THAT ARE NOT RIGHT AND THAT WE LIVE TO REGRET AND WE ALL MAKE WRONG DECISIONS BUT THE BOTTOM LINE IS...WE ARE HUMAN AND VERY IMPERFECT. THE ONLY THING WE CAN DO TO MAKE AMENDS IS TO SAY, I'M SORRY...AS YOU HAVE DONE. A PUBLIC APOLOGY SHOULD MEAN A LOT BUT STILL... SOME WILL FORGIVE, SOME WON'T, HOWEVER THERE IS NOTHING MORE YOU CAN DO ABOUT IT. SO NOW...MOVE ON AND STOP BEATING UP ON YOURSELF. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Paul Drouillard
|Brother you can write!
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|Remember 'Ma' is only your Ma in THIS life..move on David..enough is enough!
Your soul is profound in its beauty don't burden it with such trivia..it really is that ya know...TRIVIA!!!!
Blessings dear One..
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Keep chipping away. Your "mistakes" are not your children's mistakes and at some point the light may go on. Good luck my friend. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Excellent poem and layout, David|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|We are all at a loss when we cannot find forgiveness
and also the treasure of acceptances within our life circles...
We all have some sort of issue too dear den brother...
Love's Bounty & Balms
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|David, You shouldn't be sorry because you did the right thing! That is the past and you deserve to move on to better days!! Love, and peace to you always! ~Chessly|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|you beat yourself up too much my friend. we all make mistakes, i imagine yours are not greater than any other man's. you can only take your own responsibility not that of another. you are an honest soul and an effective poet.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I chose love over lies,
I chose a future over futility
They sound like good choices to me.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Sad, painful and honest...but, you David are here...this is now...past, although it's there as a reminder to learn and grow from...is simply that....past.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|This tears at the heart and soul. You are sorry, and that is really big. Honesty and humility is written all over this poignant outpouring of your heart. Live for today, embrace tomorrow.
You are on the right path, keep on stepping forward one step at a time.
My healing energy your way,
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|family dynamics are challenging, especially with hopes and expectations of what should be or could be. to write I chose love over lies, in a poem that flows is beautiful. That's a family keepsake. ~Morgan|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
Frank and honest expression of what is deeply personal and highly charged.
Your strong confessional and questioning are admirable.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|A gem ~
Well now is now, and you are on the right path now with much wisdom gained, so you ought to be considered heroic. "Ma chose my mistake over me" is so sad. The fact that you are sorry is enough to express the beauty in your soul.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my so much pain...please stay safe and well dear man..Hugss|