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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
11/24/2003 |
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ahhh..the Master Poet is at it again..brilliant write..!!!!!
'The Nile has bled her mensturation'
Excellent!!!..why can't I think of lines like that..well..hmmm..it's because I'm an apprentice poet learning from the Master himself...:)
Thankyou!
vesna |
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| Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman |
11/23/2003 |
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You found a fine method for this work, it is colorful and descriptive. Classic themes suitably stated, I enjoyed this work thoroughly.
Cheers. |
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| Reviewed by Rodd Jokre |
11/22/2003 |
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I can feel what's here... Good write...
Rodd |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/22/2003 |
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| Mesmerizing Robin...Adonis from the name Tammuz... His name is Semitic a variation of the name Yahweh in the old testament, very mystical write... |
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| Reviewed by Oirdheirc Mor (Reader) |
11/22/2003 |
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Hi Robin,
This is good stuff.
Looks like you are back in the Lebanon tasting the waters from the River of Immortal Love.
You have just inspired me to write something, give me five minutes, if it goes wrong it is all your fault.
Oirdheirc Mor
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| Reviewed by Helga Ross |
11/22/2003 |
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Rich with images and syllabic sounds.
I enjoyed reading this. |
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
11/22/2003 |
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Adonis taking the face and form of the Stag... nursing from Ceridwen, the Great Boar, during Beltane. It's interesting as all seems to commingle, and come from one and same source. And then... perhaps it does. I'm fascinated, Robin.
~Alexandra~ |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
11/21/2003 |
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| Wow, Robin...Adonis never looked so good until described by your unique piece, a wonder, indeed, the face of sun's youth. :) |
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