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Is then death nothing in the unseen,
The omnipresent unseen in the seen,
When the face has gone in the seen,
& now is inscrutable in the unseen?
We are all born with bonds & wounds,
In the bay, at bay, bay blood hounds.
For whom but the coming of a stranger,
One who will make you forget who you were,
One who will show you exist no more there,
Nor where you are, nor where you were
& you will reply, you are the stranger,
Not I, the hunted, but you the hunter,
Whose face I remember not in nor dream
Before the face inscrutable in the unseen.
Copyright Robin Ouzman Hislop 2003
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
12/14/2003 |
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"Invisible Storey" is as intriguing as it is philosophical deep.
Lines five and six of first stanza can make one think a whole day.
I have enjoyed an enriching reading that complies with Poetry's commandments on "INSPIRING, INSTRUCTING AND ENCHANTING".
May You, Poet Robin Ouzman Hislop, enjoy a Healthy and Memorable Season.
My gratitude, respect, admiration and fraternity.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
12/13/2003 |
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| Robin...one of ure best write....profound profound write my friend....love n luck...BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
12/13/2003 |
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s far as I'm concerned ..THIS is your BEST piece...well, for now...:)
The omnipresent unseen in the seen,
Exceptional line...truth galore in it alone...
Remarkable write! ty!..it goes into my library!
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
12/12/2003 |
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Good piece -- thought provoking.
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/11/2003 |
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Whose face I remember not in nor dream
Before the face inscrutable in the unseen
excellent! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/10/2003 |
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What is invisible is what we can see. What we can't see we know.
Excellent poetry to ponder! |
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| Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry, R.C. |
12/10/2003 |
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| Robin, this is exceptionally good. ~~Bonnie Q |
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| Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) |
12/10/2003 |
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| oh Robin this had some excellent things to be seen, I thought the questions were excellent, al |
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