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|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Sunbeams will come again. Patient waiting will pay off.
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Your sadness is palpable David...Possibly a dose of SAD like I suffer with..A light lamp helps enormously.
Your poem has a certain pensive quality about it that I find charmingly wistful..I hope the sunbeams arive soon!
Love and Hugs, Diana
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Oh how meloncholy as you describe the plight of awaiting the sunbeams to brighten the day and your heart...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|Really good poem. Sounds like you need a great big hug. I hope you get one.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|A most interesting and refined poem. Desperately sad and lonely, but I really enjoyed it. It was wonderful how you brought in the comparison with Marshall.