|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|The scat-i-rific nature of the structuring of this poem is spot on with the sentiments expressed. Excellent choices to excoriate the cliche images of trucks and the environment they move through and around. Would that more could picture the loneliness of the drivers such as you've portrayed here, there would be yet another improvement in our understanding that we are all ONE.|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|What a creative piece, Morgan. I like the sense of chaos and emotional distress. Such a real life moment. Great writing:)
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Best remain alert, we never know what may wake us out of the fatigue.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Great use of metaphor (and emphasis in form). I think most can relate needing to get hold of oneself as so much uncertainly surrounds us. Nicely done! ~Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|So imaginative and creative. For those who say form should follow function, I say balderdash! The form in this case is i n s p i r e d.
I am trying to recall a term that means between the words, or
more than the words themselves. Probably starts with meta, as in
metafiction. There is an existential feel to this. What can't be said in words can be said -- or damn near said -- in the shapes of the spaces...oh, man. I am making a mess of this.
Best settle for B R I L L I A N T !
x:)x Phyllis x:)x
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Great use of poetic form here, Morgan, and it amplifies your meaning superbly. Love the sense of autopilot on that continuous loop of love-thoughts, yet hemmed in before and behind by streams of light. Love both comes at us head-on and we also follow it's tail-lights gladly and without question. Great thoughts in this, xx|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing this meaningful metaphorical write, Morgan. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|Love the way you've set out this poem, Morgan. So much to think about. Laurel|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|The highway is always full of risks
front and behind, future and past.
Love the metaphor, Morgan, the driving on
with the repeated warnings to look out.
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Morgan, in word and form, this is one for the library. -gene.|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|You got hold of me while reading your excellence.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|The poem format intensifies the object lesson.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|I love the format and the intensity of this poem!
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wow Morgan, actually felt I was driving the car myself and drifting along with the traffic....wonderful job.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|love the format for this gem of a poem, Morgan! Great work!
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Realizations and revelations...this is awesome!
And life goes by so dreadfully fast just as our driving and I wish this poem could go on and on because I identify with your words and flashes so well.
Cocoa soon? Love,
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Haha! Right, Morgan, maybe you might give some serious thought about getting a hold of yourself. I mean, heck, woman, you're already losing control of the steering mechanism. Gotta love it.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|This is different Morgan, great write.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|Better get a hold of yourself or you might loose control of the wheel. Great write Morgan! ~Chessly|
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|What a great idea and concept with the visual enhancement.
I was getting dizzy as I was all over the road wth you.
Very compelling write.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THE REALIZATION THAT ONE IS 'FALLING...' POPS UP...AT THE WEIRDEST TIMES AND PLACES...AND ONE CAN'T POSSIBLY IGNORE THE 'SIGNS' THAT EVEN THE 'TRUCKS' CAN'T HIDE. SO WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, MORGAN AND BLESSINGS. LOVE & FAITH...JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|good to script scenarioss and yessss better to be in control..nice flow of words, Morgan :)neerja|