|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Much said in this piece and many emotions spent. Well done! ~Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|can feel the "aloneness"|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Such a feeling of isolation. One wonders what she'll end up doing if her future seems black.
The modern world you depict so well.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|UNTIL THE GIRL BECOMES A WOMAN AND 'FIGHTS' FOR HER FUTURE AND THE REALIZATION OF HER DREAMS, THEN HER LIFE WILL CONTINUE TO BE OVERSHADOWED BY 'PRETTY MEMORIES'. A POWERFUL INSPIRATIONAL WORK! WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, MORGAN. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|fabulous build to a stunning conclusion, Morgan; just a girl always but beautied through time and experience. You have a wonderful poet's eye for the telling detail and augmenting insight. xx|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|What intrigues me, MM, is the resounds the written words leave behind; leaving much to the readers imagination. I sense personal threads in this (as I do in most all your poetic explorations) that are touching and evoke bittersweet emotions. It seems that another chapter is about to unfold for that girl. A palpable emotional insight.
Blessings ... r
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I think I know a girl or two like this, Morgan. I find your poem compelling in its sadness expressed. Well done. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Love the line "the world throws back bones". Powerful sense of loneliness in these lines, too. Creative:) hugs,
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|More than a girl...love spent,
looking back...seeing nothing ahead!!
You have such a gift with words!!!
|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|quite a sad poem, Morgan. Does it stand for all the women, and men too, who have found their hopes for a meaningful relationship dashed and still search for something. Is she a girl of the streets searching for love. I like 'the world throws back bones'
Your poetry makes one think.
thanks for reading my poem
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Morgan, this is deeply entwined with introspect, or is that retrospect?
Either way, well done. Thanks Dick.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|the woman who wants to be girl again,
innocence and all its pals and cousins,
for there is no real going back..only in hopes.
Moving and demanding, Morgan.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Infused with a strong voice, this is surely brilliant writing Morgan ~
and I think the ending is effective.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|just a girl, more a woman ... excellent poem ...|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|The steps of life going here and there, Just a girl, but oh so much more!|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wonderful work Morgan.
Newfie Hugs Rose
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Such a yearning lonliness to find something that is missing. Your analogies and metaphors although almost disguised come through in each verse.
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|beautiful write.. :)best wishes.neerja|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Excellent heartfelt writing.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|This is heartbreaking, my friend and oh so lovely at the same time. How do you do that? I know. It's in your heart. That is the only place it could be, because you're, "Just a Girl."
THIS is a keeper . . .