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Morgan B Merriweather

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R u s h
by Morgan B Merriweather
Thursday, February 23, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Never had a reason to believe

in the timing of things

or key points in an endless conversation,

just that feeling,

beneath the ground,

the trembling

rising up through my feet,

the        R U S H

that makes you stand back

clack, clack, clack,

your thought drops in mine

the freight train flies through­­­­­­­­­­­­­ the station

you appear on the other side

of fantasy,

holding my one way ticket

on the rhapsody line

 

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Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Morgan, you never fail to fill me with marvelous imagery and the mastery of creative thoughts that accelerate at the speed of light
Reviewed by D. Vegas
Morgan, Very different but stated so well.
I love it!

Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
Excellent poem - describes how I feel sometimes. The important things of life
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Marvelous and gutsy Morgan!
Love this!!!
Chris
Reviewed by Axilea MU
Wonderful, I read it again and suddenly felt the rush of images, sensations and the clarity of one precise moment. I really like that "other side of fantasy" and the "rhapsody line".

Axilea
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Interesting and creative perspective here, Morgan. For me, especially in the beginning of this piece; it's like the imagery happens in slow motion; a moment suspended and analyzed in time. Great write!
Sheila
Reviewed by neerja gandhi
wow...great flow...great rushing rush...lovely poem :)Good Wishes
neerja
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
This reminds me of a moment ten months or so ago when I almost "missed the train." It would have been my fault. Well done, Morgan. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by JMS Bell
THIS IS A BRILLIANT WORK...THE SUBJECT IS WHAT IS SO COMPELLING. THE EFFECTS OF A 'R U S H' CAN BE LOOKED AT IN TWO ENTIRELY DIFFERENT PERSPECTIVES. THE FIRST BEING WHEN TWO PEOPLE COME TOGETHER AND ARE TOTALLY IN SYNCH WITH EACH OTHER...THE REALIZATION OF THAT KIND OF PERFECTION IS A BEAUTIFUL 'R U S H' THAT YOU NEVER WANT TO FORGET. BUT ON THE OTHER SIDE, WHEN ONE FINDS PERFECTION IN THE 'R U S H' OF AN ADDICTIVE DRUG THAT CLEAVES LIKE A SECOND SKIN...MAKING IT IMPOSSIBLE TO FORGET IT'S THERE...THIS IS A VERY SAD THING. I AM GLAD THAT YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT THE FIRST ONE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND MUCH FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATION
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Fun, running-thought piece, Morgan, great last line. Clack, clacks.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Reviewed by pat medlin
home run morgan!
Reviewed by richard cederberg
Sometimes intuition gives us a clearer picture than intellect. And being in the right place at the right time (and knowing it) puts a different slant on something other than our own understanding of timing. And when that special opportunity, or rush of creativity, or person, "appears", the intellect seems to be given a day off as the wings of imagination and hope are unfurled. Good stuff MM. Enjoyed... r
Reviewed by Odin Roark
Superb collage of wordsmithing. With so many sparks flying from but one word, Rush, the igniting of tender you've managed to gather round is rewarding, and then some. Thank you for sharing this. Would that we all could create a muse of sorts, allowing us entry into such a free form arena of imagination.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Timing! And what a rush when that freight train flies! Enjoyed this one very much! Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
timing is everything, as we have talked about so many times....love the train affect in this one, clever and poignant..

Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by jude forese
the timing of events rely solely on their potential to be transformed by the moment or the belief in their possibility to become ...

fascinating poem, Morgan ...
Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
got a RUSH just reading this...
Reviewed by Richard King
Nice imagery here Morgan, I like the metaphorical presentation. Dick
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Thanks *Morgan* for the rushing hours delightful
timing~rushing hours delightful for a train ride!!

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
I love this. Very much. Catch 22 in its way. Excellent.
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Rhapsody line..one way ticket..good timing and rythum in your poem..
enjoyed "R u s h" Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
your thought drops in mine

the freight train flies through­­­­­­­­­­­­­ the station

you appear on the other side
of fantasy,
holding my one way ticket
on the rhapsody line

... love these lines especially, Morgan. Rumbled in the nick of time!! Close encounters of the very best kind which suddenly convince of us the uncanny phenomenon of "timing". Adore the way you set this up. xx
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