|Reviewed by J Guenther
|Promising. Nice consonantal balance in many places. A tiny bit of tightening might make it shine even more. "Deep depths" would be a very good place to start. Maybe rework the ending for more punch, too. Fine work.|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|A LOVELY SATCHEL...FILLED WITH THE SCENT OF BEAUTIFUL ROMANCE. DONE SO WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|You speak the language of love like water for chocolate...it is so smooth and easy on the tongue and satin upon the ears
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Sparkling effervesence of visions in
your poem *Morgan* expressive of the
wonderous sketch for making it real!!!!
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|Sometimes, all we can do is hold on. Your opening lines are so strong in image and meaning, as is your entire poem. So moving! ~Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Flows like honey...gooey good!|
|Reviewed by Jennifer Christian
|Dreaming of sparkling kisses -- a nice thought.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Lay on the open page your hidden voice,
so that I may hold it in my hands,
Totally ADORE these lines especially, Morgan, as well as the swooning repetitions of words and lines with "hold on, hold on". So trance-like and evocative of intensity, along with your dreamy descriptions and lilting tone. Has all the warmth of a rapt reverie and desire for transportation. Just lovely! :)) xx
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|this is poetry of great tenderness
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A heartthrobbing poem that oozes passion...
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Oh, I'm so there with every word of this dreamy poem!
What is going on with you girl? We have lost touch! Who is this mystery man of kisses?
|Reviewed by jude forese
|your wonderful poem definitely leaves an imprint on the imagination as well as the emotion ...|
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Enigmatic assurance that when all else fails, we still have our imagination as best friend, confidant, and most importantly, a writer's built-in shrink.|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|beautiful and very romantic :))
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Morgan, A very visual writing...
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Your words magically paint colorful, sparkling images in my mind and I like it.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The power of the poem on the written page to inspire thoughts of love. Wonderful.
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|ahhh these floating soothing words of love...this leaves me with a wistful smile...beautiful morgan|
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Lovely diamonds on the waters and sparkling kisses to romance
and dreamy. A fine pen you uniquely verse your words Morgan.
The artwork is beautiful.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Nice thoughts, perfectly recorded in this poem. The words were unearthly, meant for a place in between the here and now and the place you desdcribed, and that place is the community of pure love. There is such a place, it is just very, very difficult to get there, and once you find it, even more difficult to maintain. Sorry. I was going on and on . . . Meant every word of it however.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|I love how soft and sensual this poem is, the sketch is amazing.
Umm, you have been busy..
Peace, love and light,