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Feet on Fire
by Morgan B Merriweather

Tuesday, May 08, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Go sugar baby bum bum run

Feet on fire

Clamber up the tiny windy sandy trail

where bunnies hide beneath orange-red beach plumbs

and the tall flirty grass,

Follow the resounding crash of tide’s time

and the crystal castles,

let the seashells spill secrets

of the mermaid and the moon,

Pop the bubble up burps from the sun

before the fog swallows them whole,

Go sugar baby bum bum run

Feet on fire

Curious as can be

Go listen to the sea

 

 

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Reviewed by Dark Knight 6/1/2014
Reading this makes me want to go to the beach-lovely way of expressing yourself
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader) 12/3/2012
It is wonderful for me when I take the swing back into an AD portfolio, to see the writings that I had to miss. It's like we are drivers of our vehicles and must keep our eyes on the road (our daily doings), but savor the slack in traffic that allows us to look out the side windows at all there is to see. I am glad I chose this one of yours because it is glorious, Morgan. From the 'child's nick-name,' so musical and intimate, to the visual of little feet, flaming in their eagerness, there is a wonderland of glances out side windows in this poem. "....tiny windy sandy..." would be so lessened by the dropping of any one of those three words. "....bunnies..." instead of rabbits presents endearment to that species. "...tall flirty grass," those three words combine with the tiny child to offer action observed of wind, motion, laughing child. Then to use 'crystal' instead of sand enlivens a natural element with magic. "....seashells spill secrets" THOSE three words conjur up for the reader a personal experience of holding shells to ears, and there aren't many people who do not know that sensation. You even enlivened fog! Your final line leaves salt on the tongue, waves breaking both distant and close and seagull voices in the air. So the facial expression this brings from me is a relaxed smile, wide open ears, nose, eyes and mind. Thanks. This poem beautifully expresses why humans love the ocean. ~~ Diana
Reviewed by J Guenther 11/3/2012
Strangely compelling.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/9/2012
Light and delightful and fun... ...thank you for sharing this uplifting offering, Morgan. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd 5/30/2012
Lovely piece of writing. There is something special about children playing on a beach. It always seems so timeless.
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader) 5/27/2012
Lovely! Takes me back to when my daughter was a baby and I'd take her to the beach. I could barely keep up with her and her enthusiasm and amazement with nature.
Reviewed by JMS Bell 5/24/2012
OBSERVING A YOUNG ONE...ON THE PATH OF GROWTH. A PATH WE'VE ALL TAKEN. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS, WELL DONE, 'FLEETING' VIEW, OF INNOCENCE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Andy Turner 5/22/2012
Your apples are still green.
Top notch!
Reviewed by Don Juan Amante 5/17/2012
so well done, even this old kid enjoyed it!
Reviewed by Diana Wiles 5/15/2012
Absolutely delightful!
Diana...
Reviewed by richard cederberg 5/13/2012
Whimsical and touching MM. enjoyed. r
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 5/12/2012
Sand, sea and sweetness *Morgan*
I see of You in this tender poem!!!

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 5/10/2012
You take us back to childhood, where all the world is full of surprise and delight! This resonates deeply and makes me feel the joy of it all.
Reviewed by Odin Roark 5/10/2012
At once both an adult reverie and a fleeting moment for the child-like origins of honesty and imagination.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/10/2012
What a delightful poem of childhood exuberance. Damned if I don't feel that way sometimes when I'm approaching the sea.

Ron
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 5/9/2012
Magical...love, love, love this...did you know I love this!!!! (should go down with the the Humpty Dumpty, Mary had a little lamb..etc :)
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 5/9/2012
Morgan this is a sweet and whimisical. Our kids tip toe on the sand sandles in hand. Sandbuckets, castles of sand and sea water motes.

Lovely poetry to go listen to the sea
Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 5/9/2012
I love the carefree endearing mood of this poem. Your title is perfect! Love the photo..Miss you...

Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/9/2012
This so reminds me of a day at the beach when my daughter was little to see them enjoy the sand, sea, waves and yes even jumping from one foot to the other on the hot sand....love it.
fee
Reviewed by pat medlin 5/9/2012
a treat indeed! i read something delightful like this and have all this curiosity and visions on what small creature, view, thoughts might have inspired your words.

were you sitting on this beach...was it a sand crab scitteling back to his safe cool hole...was it the sea grass tickling your legs...maybe watching little kids hopping on tip toe over the hot sand to the edge of the water. what fun these
imaginings (thataword?) inspired by this wonderful piece.
Reviewed by D. Vegas 5/9/2012
Morgan, A poem of curiosity, learning and getting out into the world.
Enjoyed!

Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 5/9/2012
Getting inside the mind of a little one is a special event, and you have managed to do that here. That takes finesse, talent and a wonderful inner soul.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 5/8/2012
now here's a treat and a delight,
Morgan; love your styling and word choices:
grass, crash, crystal castles modulating to
seashells and secrets, and love the tenderness
and energy that run through

john

ps: i remember the photo well



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