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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/22/2005 |
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| a beautiful and emotive poem of lost love ... great images ... |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
5/22/2005 |
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This is so beautifully written, and sad....I remember the feeling well...outstanding write Joyce!
Peace and love, Carole |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/22/2005 |
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| I can SO relate to the emotions and the meaning expressed in these verses, Joyce. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran |
5/21/2005 |
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| sad, but excellent written! |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/21/2005 |
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| A truly sad and powerful piece, Joyce. |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
5/20/2005 |
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You painted an excellent picture here of the aching of loss. Your word usage is excellent. Felt this..... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente |
5/20/2005 |
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A lovely poem, Joyce. Well written.
Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/20/2005 |
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Superb poem for the topic. feeling blue over lost love
is such a common thing but it never stops hurting!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
5/20/2005 |
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Emotions poemized to picture the flash of the heart.
"Lost" strikes deep thoughts on the understanding of
togetherness and true love.
Thoughts of healthy emotions will bring creativity into full motion.
Keep posting, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
5/20/2005 |
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| Sad but so beautifully done! |
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