|Reviewed by Richard Bowers
|There was movement in my sleep
What appears from the deep
I look as though a quiet keep
Not knowing were the source comes
Unlike a dream that never ends
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Seeing, smelling, tasting, feeling, and the appearance of this poem is great. Ver lovely tribute to someone lucky to be around you.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|mmmm..was/am there..wow!Senses awhirlin'
..am saving this one..
|Reviewed by Richard Swartz
|I really enjoy this one and I got lost in the moment and I felt as if I was the one it was happing too it seem so real and it seem as if it takes you in to the story line of the Poem like you almost become a part of it. very well written...
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I got the touch, I got the smell, I even got the imagining, but that poem stopped my breathing for a sec.
and that night was spent in heavenly bliss
as every wish was embraced
the smile appeared on their face
no one could erase!
WArm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
EnJOY! Your Holiday Splendor and all the memories to bless ya'!
Write On! definitly!
|Reviewed by Charlie
|Very seductive. I can almost smell her bath water and lotion.--Charlie|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Well done piece with the aroma of love all around....
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Interesting pen,enjoyed sweet man...Hugsss|