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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
10/21/2004 |
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Beautiful John, This was so poignant and beautiful, feeling this one so deeply tonight.
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
10/11/2004 |
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| excellent poem, John. there's something I loved in every stanza. |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
10/9/2004 |
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| Wow, where did this one come from? Excellent fourth verse, John. Good work here. :) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/9/2004 |
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| there is an intense sense of coming to terms with yourself in this poem ... you've developed it with much introspective emotion ... |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/9/2004 |
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Excellent poetry John!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader) |
10/9/2004 |
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"A life of constant fret and care
"Lover" is such a lonesome name
But it's the one I'll always wear
To miss and love are both the same."
John, I really like this.
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/8/2004 |
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Excellent lines. I especially like,
"To miss and love are both the same."
Love it! |
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