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John H Bidwell

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A Chance
by John H Bidwell

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A Chance

A chance to hold you in my arms at last,
A chance we could forget about the past.
Let all our pain and suffering be done-
A chance for you and me to have some fun.

You know how much youíve come to mean to me
And what Iíd give for just the chance to see
If everything Iím dreaming could be true -
The reason why Iím so in love with you.

Although I have to think that chances are
My dreamís too big; my love canít reach that far,
Could there still be some haunting reason why
No matter what- this dream just will not die?

Why everywhere I look I see your face
And all the cares upon me canít erase
A single moment we have ever shared,
No other love with this could be compared.

So wonder how a dream as this exists,
And by all trials effortless resists
All powers that would try to stay this dance
Forever in our dreams to find a chance.

John H. Bidwell



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Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
"So wonder how a dream as this exists,
And by all trials effortless resists
All powers that would try to stay this dance
Forever in our dreams to find a chance."

When that "Change" materializes (for this might be just a premonition)treasure her! My dad "saw" my mom in a dream ... before he actually met her!

Beautiful dream...beautiful write, John.

Be Blessed!
Lena
Reviewed by The Poetess
Sounds like a beautiful dream.
Reviewed by karen logan
Very nicely put.
Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
Wow! This poem is very beautiful and full of emotion. It flows so smooth and the read is very much enjoyable. This is a very touching piece too and it seems inspiring to me as well. It is filled with a great deal of love. If it were possible to grade this piece I'd give it an A. Amazing job. You're a really talented poet. Thanks for sharing this poem and please keep on writing.

all the best,
lena
Reviewed by Melody Ravert
Hi John,

A lovely and passionate piece of art! I'm seeking excerpts of poetry such as this for a book. I'd be happy to give you an acknowledgement and mention your website if you like.

Either way, I really enjoyed this poem.

Best wishes!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Excellent write John!!

May all your dreams come true!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese
a chance worth striving for ... well done!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
A tender write felt deep in the soul. Thank you for this offering, John. Love and peace, Regis.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
John this is so beautiful, so tender.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
John,

This is beautiful and so heartfelt.
Excellent poetry thank you!!

Peg
Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen
Lovely! Oh, so romantic!

Julie :)
Reviewed by Tami Ryan
John,

This is the verse that got to me:
"You know how much youíve come to mean to me
And what Iíd give for just the chance to see
If everything Iím dreaming could be true-
The reason why Iím so in love with you."

and this line too:
"Why everywhere I look I see your face"
Oooooh, yeah.

Why is it every poem you write grabs hold of me? EVERY ONE.
Always good work!
Tami
Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
This is like receiving long stem roses. :0)It was beautiful.
Excellent write.
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Excellent write, my friend...
May all your dreams come true..

*Linda*
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Take the chance, its worth it :-) Wonderful write!

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