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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
1/19/2005 |
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I really found this so romantic.
I love this verse:
"If there is madness in me.
it is in loving without thought,
or reason"
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| Reviewed by Masood Lohar |
1/13/2005 |
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| Very sensual... it is all about the touch |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
1/7/2005 |
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Very beautiful,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader) |
1/1/2005 |
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| Gentile sentiment, well done. |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
12/23/2004 |
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Wonderful expressions of love tender, yea though the mind can conceive such, the heart surrenders to make it real. Great write Chanti
Allen |
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| Reviewed by Tobias Geissen (Reader) |
12/23/2004 |
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| Good one. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
12/23/2004 |
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| Beautiful haunting write! |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed |
12/22/2004 |
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Love. A simple yet unexplainable emotive rush that floods us with so much more than we can plan in a 24 hour day.
blessin's and happy heartbreak-free holidays my Sistah,
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
12/22/2004 |
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I guess I will mostly agree with Kate Burnside on this one.
I have to...as she stole my thunder.
Kate is great...I admire her work, too...but this piece above,
Chanti...is as smooth as whipped cream...and just as delicious. |
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| Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader) |
12/21/2004 |
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| Excellent! |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
12/20/2004 |
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| Very nice. Wonderful romance. |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
12/20/2004 |
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sigh
thats why were poets...........
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
12/20/2004 |
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| Oooh, been there done that. Wonderful write, Chanti! |
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
12/20/2004 |
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| Brava! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
12/20/2004 |
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Chnati
A beautifully crafted and sensual poem, excellent!
Blessings |
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| Reviewed by Jeff Mason |
12/19/2004 |
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| Exceptionally beautiful poetry; and even more so, the thoughts within the poetry. Superb crafting and imagery, and in such a short space, you portray such depth of beauty and passionate emotions. -- Jeff |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
12/19/2004 |
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A splendid write Chanti
The best lovemaking is done in the mind.
Peace and happiness
HH |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
12/19/2004 |
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Chanti,
... and they are exceptional 'romantic thoughts' - a beautiful and romantic poem brillantly conceived and penned!!
Best wishes,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart |
12/19/2004 |
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| Sometimes love can be so close, yet so far. Sounds pointless, but I'd rather reach and grab air than never reach at all. |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
12/19/2004 |
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| A breath taking pen. At least in ones thoughts you can aquire what your heart desires. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/19/2004 |
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| Marvelous romantic thoughts, Chanti. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
12/19/2004 |
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This is just breathless, Chanti! A pure distillation of what romantic love truly is. You take us there, line by line, and I love the way your thoughts link through, like a beautiful daisy-chain. Although you make us aware of the illusory nature of this love, the feelings are so strong and intense that our feelings are gripped right through to the final ellipsis - and beyond. This poem simply transcends itself, as all well-crafted writes should. Simply gorgeous and, as Regis has said, the graphic is a wonderful compliment. TY LOL Kate
Chanti - I am just left reeling from your lavish appreciation of my work, and cannot express just how much your kindness and praise has meant to me. Thank you from the bottom of my heart - I KNOW I don't deserve such accolades, but bless you so, so much. XXXXXX |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/19/2004 |
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Excellent package Chanti!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by George Jackson |
12/19/2004 |
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| You should have those thoughts more often, if it makes you write this well. Beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
12/19/2004 |
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| Maybe so, but still a wonderful dream. Excellent poem Chanti. ~ Sara |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
12/19/2004 |
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Chanti, you've certainly captured beauty in this gem. Awesome poetry.
Lisa |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/19/2004 |
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the ambiance of a romantic heart first begins in the mind ...
superb poem! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
12/18/2004 |
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| Sometimes I wonder, if that's where true love, only exists? |
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| Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) |
12/18/2004 |
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| this is such a good thought I think, to allow such flow, I applaud you in its creation, to glipse, to understnd, such things, to share, to allow us to recognize the purity in it, and simply ..... remember, ty Al |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/18/2004 |
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| Wow! Perhaps you did have sweet dreams. You certainly have come up with a sweet creation with these verses, Chanti. And I LOVE the graphic as well. Thank you for sharing this captivating experience. Much love to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger |
12/18/2004 |
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| Chanti, this is pure poetry at its finest. The raw emotions that poured through my veins as I read this, is well, to put it bluntly, were simply incredible. Thats the true wonders of the mind, for it can bring such momentous moments and vivid visions to life. Stunning write. Bravo. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/18/2004 |
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| Passionate sensual sentiments beautifully expressed Chanti! Very eloquent poem! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/18/2004 |
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| So sweet and so vivid makes me wish that all love could be so simple and pure....Felix |
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| Reviewed by Dave Harm |
12/18/2004 |
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| To choose love, in thoughts and dreams - what a wonderful concept. To find love always in our mind - how peaceful. |
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