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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
1/1/2008 |
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Chanti,
Love how you separate the mind and heart with the verses. A strong realism to the first verse...as we never truly know someone as much as we think we do. The heart is easier to discern, though and that's reflected in the second verse. Fantastic imagery throughout, and imaginative too.
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) |
8/29/2007 |
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Having once been in show biz, I could especially relate to this piece,
Chanti. It is beautifully expressed and glitters with images.
I am so happy that you and Edward are soulmates!!! |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
6/20/2007 |
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Chanti,
This poem is very expressive and I like your use of metaphors to add to the overall picture you paint with your writing pen. Enjoyed and will be reviewing more of your works.
George |
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| Reviewed by Jim Compton |
6/10/2007 |
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| take a bow... |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
6/8/2007 |
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wonderfully expressed, chanti. very much enjoyed this masterfully penned piece.
peace and blessings,
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
6/4/2007 |
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Very nice word flow, imagery, and subject matter, Chanti. I love the style you wrote this in too.
I cannot read your mind
It is a labyrinth
too gordian to navigate
I agree with these lines, Chanti, because the mind is a complex place, and it is too gordian to navigate. Thank you for sharing this intense piece.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Somali Community Access Network SomaliCAN |
6/4/2007 |
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A beautiful write, Chanti.
The complexity of it intrigues me,
...always will
It is like a corridor lined with doors
and filled with possibility.
The person you describe in these lines is very clever, smart and brilliant. I am happy for you. You never feel lonely in the company of such beautiful mind.
Thank you.
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| Reviewed by Edwin Larson |
5/31/2007 |
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This is beautiful Snuggles!! Wow...Thanks for this :)
Your Cuddles. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/8/2007 |
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Superb imagery and meaning awakened from your verses, Chanti. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Walter Jones |
5/6/2007 |
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| A touch of magic, words pulling images, triggers leaving the mind free to explore warm tempting places, a true passage into life.. Walt |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/4/2007 |
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Stunning Chanti...as always. It is so good to be back and reading such wonderful works as this.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre |
5/3/2007 |
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| Just awesome... you are one talented lady!!! |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
5/3/2007 |
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Matters of the heart
That tear us apart.
We give it our all. . .
Till the. . .
Excellent poetry
Climactic
DWB |
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| Reviewed by Lucas Wottrich |
5/3/2007 |
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-each nerve ending to the texture of your expression- What a great line!
Really like this one, great use of metaophor and simile, which are both easily over done, but in this case just right. Bravo! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
5/2/2007 |
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| Fantasitc write! |
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
5/1/2007 |
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| Enjoy your sense to uncover & release - As you have with this grouping of words - |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
4/30/2007 |
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| A resonance in your voice rings true to this reader in this piece. The images paint a picture in this readers mind and makes me desire more, more...I loved it! |
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| Reviewed by Butch Howard |
4/30/2007 |
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Chanti, this is absolutely gorgeous! The insight you reveal is romantically charged with sublime imagery and the flow exquisite!
"An exploration upon ground
that accepts my footprints
and then sets them in stone."
I love the feel of this! Great job!
~Butch
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
4/30/2007 |
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| you have away with words and poetic expression Chanti, this read out excellente with meaning in this world of beings that we have to deal with |
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| Reviewed by Jeff Mason |
4/30/2007 |
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| Though your imagery here is subtle, it explodes with resounding messages. Your words are more than beautifully-crafted; they are quite sublime and I feel both love and angst. This truly is a wonderful offering. -- Jeff |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
4/29/2007 |
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Curtain Call is outstanding and your chosen words
painted a vivid picture and imagery
Excellent poetic view of thoughts!!
Love And Peace to you always
your friend..Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
4/29/2007 |
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| great read/write. i enjoyed reading it. you have excellent word skills. yes, the heart is another matter... that's good. cheers |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
4/29/2007 |
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Chanti,
The light shines from every door and you seem to have chosen the brightest. A perfect gem. |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
4/29/2007 |
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I love your imagery Chanti! :)
this is such a gem to treasure!
as I will!
I Love the mystery you weave so well here!
Warmly, WArrior Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/29/2007 |
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| Whatever this "food" is that you're feeding on, Chanti (!!) it is music to our ears and water for our soul as you articulate its effects upon YOUR heart and mind. Tender and tactile; enquiring and enriching, you have set a stage with a scene of exquisite beauty that leaves us crying "More"... Play on! :)) K xx Lovely to have you here again! xoxo |
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| Reviewed by Karen Cino |
4/29/2007 |
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The imagery in Curtain Call is outstanding. This is so full of emotions. Excellent write.
~hugs~
Karen |
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| Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar |
4/29/2007 |
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Chianti,
I love this. Your writing is like your name. Just as a fine wine has strengths, subtleties, hints of fruits and/or spices and warms or cools as you drink it in, this poem enriches me.
Intense.
Terry
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
4/29/2007 |
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Wow! What a wonderful write...reading a heart as a blind person reads braille! Paints a vivid picture for the reader! Enjoyed this so very much! Beautifull written, full of passion!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/29/2007 |
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Wonderful offering!!
Are you cold in Johies too??
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone |
4/29/2007 |
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| Very pretty and nicely done. Enjoyed. Lady J |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/29/2007 |
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| Splendid write. Love the metaphors. |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
4/28/2007 |
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An enjoyable view of thought...your words play out the picture of one who knows well the heart and love of another....
nice.....Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/28/2007 |
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Interesting, yet so delicately penned. Full of emotion and longing. Enjoyed this much.
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/28/2007 |
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Chanti,
This is glorious, beautiful, meaningful verse! Well done, ENCORE!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
4/28/2007 |
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| I enjoy your writing.... |
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| Reviewed by H Cruz |
4/28/2007 |
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| Enigmatic! Yet enchanting... |
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| Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd |
4/28/2007 |
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I agreee totally.Quality!
Roshan |
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| Reviewed by Stan Grimes |
4/28/2007 |
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| Top notch write, Chanti. Your use of alliteration excellent. Great write! |
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