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To the Point
by ~ Chanti

Saturday, August 04, 2007
Not rated by the Author.

A light write about a rather dark subject...

Will a brilliant beam of light
open the shades
upon my darkened world
Or will this be another means
to be freed from what I hold?
For when I’ve kept a grip
on the stuff that I called dear
I found instead I lost it all
and had to face the fear
For only with open hands
that were willing to let go
did I learn my greatest lessons
and survived the deadliest blows
All I have is within me
And that’s all I’ll ever need
The mighty Redwood tree
that stands,
was once just a tiny seed
So with my roots set into earth
and my arms raised to the sky
I will offer up my thanks

when that needle strikes my eye.

Copyright 2007 Chanti


My next lens replacement operation is scheduled for September 5th. What a thrill it will be to see clearly again. I was told after my eye exam that I would be classified as 'legally blind'. It's hard to describe how tough it's been to live in a state of perpetual mist especially after having enjoyed perfect 20/20 vision throughout my life. I'm lucky though because my sight can be restored. Many others are not as fortunate. How my heart goes out to those.
My grateful thanks to Dr. Daras.
  

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Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 10/21/2007
Exquisite, Chanti! And, so 'viable'! I think sight is extremely precious.

The new word of hope is eye surgery, me too, cataracts! Everything looks gray. And the needle? Ouch, can't wait! How are you, now?

I'm afraid of eye surgery, I've never seen a Redwood tree.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 8/26/2007
masterfully expressed, chanti.
may all go well with your eye operation!
peace and blessings,
carolyn
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/9/2007
For when I’ve kept a grip
on the stuff that I called dear
I found instead I lost it all
and had to face the fear

I find these verses particularly meaningful, Chanti. I do hope and pray that all comes out well for you. Love and sincere best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Art Sun 8/6/2007
Hope everything works out well for you....

Art Sun...
Reviewed by Roger Ochs 8/6/2007
And from your visual adversity comes artistic writes. Bravo on more than one level.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 8/6/2007
Dear Chanti,

I believe that the American Natives had it right ... we own nothing. Let us take our fill of the stream and then allow other travelers to partake of the same gifts that were created for all.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/6/2007
Chanti,

ouch. This line made me cringe..."when that needle strikes my eye". Don't worry 'bout it, just think what a blessing it will be able to see!!!!!!! You're in my prayers, hon.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Edwin Larson 8/5/2007
I know you've been apprehensive about this for the past few weeks Snuggles, but know, everything will work out fine. You are the most incredible woman I have ever met...you are my inspiration. I love you so very, very much!!



Cuddles
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 8/5/2007
Oh my, hun, Chanti always comes through...
Kates prayers never fail, and mine never will. You will soon be able to look at my lovely bio pic in 20/20..... Hmmmm, mabe that's not the best encouragement..

Jesus is with you babes....
Reviewed by Guy Hogan 8/5/2007
An intense write that is straight from a real experience. Good luck.
Reviewed by Margo Snyder 8/5/2007
You are a very beautiful girl. Thank you for sharing. God bless you.
Margo
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone 8/5/2007
Chanti, I do understand. Though I have worn glasses all my life at 45 my right eye had developed the same due to medication, five years later the left. I know that someday the film behind will have to be lasered out but I know what that misty sight is like. Good luck and you will be fine. Lady J
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 8/5/2007
Baby, I am so sorry to hear of your sight problems. Gutted, in fact. And yet, in characteristic Chanti style, you seek only to count your blessings and to pursue faithfulness and positivity and making good out of bad. You have such a serene soul, Chanti, and your example is awesome. You have found the unshakeable secret, the Truth of which you cannot be robbed. You do exude such inner poise and grace that we can be sure that, whatever life throws at you, you will always arise and overcome, your shining soul and gorgeous beauty of face, faith and stature even more robust and shining. God be with you and all charged with your care. You are a peace-bringer and your strength and calm is positively angelic. With love and prayers, Kate xx
Reviewed by richard cederberg 8/5/2007
Your picture describes this challenge of yours well. Remain focused on the positive outcome - not the what if's. Blessings ...
Richard
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/5/2007
You are in my prayers dear Chanti!!

All will be okay I am sure of it!!

Stay positive my friend!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Jim Compton 8/5/2007
Being blind as a bat myself, I understand. I hope all goes well with the procedure and when you can once again see clearly, I hope you like what you see.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 8/5/2007
My the Lord hold Dr. Daras hand, so, when the first snow arrive you will se my face smiling at you.
Georg.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/4/2007
So glad to hear that you will be once again able to see the beauty of the world around you and especially the written word before you. My thoughts are with you now and always.
hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 8/4/2007
I indeed hope an abundance of light
will be yours sweet lady.
With love,
Ron
Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills 8/4/2007
I'm praying for all to go well my friend...Michelle
Reviewed by stan nassano 8/4/2007
Good luck to you Chanti,kinda of puts thing in perspective a bit,
which I thought your poem brought out.
stan
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 8/4/2007
I am keeping you in my prayers.

I love you, my friend.
Tami
Reviewed by Stan Grimes 8/4/2007
Heartfelt write...and you are a mighty redwood. Hope all goes well.
Reviewed by Maria Charlotte 8/4/2007
You will be in my prayers Chanti......
Stay strong.

M.C.
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