by karen l logan
Monday, January 10, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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In re-reading this piece, I found a line that needed fixing. Also, for clarity for the reader: my idea on this comes from the hope I have to never crush a heart tender as a flower or beautiful as a gem. We are all worth budding to our own brilliance.
In the interest of good concsience
I resolve to your perfect whim,
The budding of your blossom
The luster in your gem,
To always aspire my foots perfect step
To tread lightly,
pure of heart,
Never to judge a flower
By the peddles falling apart.
For if by chance
by small decree
I neglect to observe,
A budding beauty
In noble prestige,
Then I too,
Will fall apart.
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|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|One of the wisest reads ever...I loived this!|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Karen, this reveals the connectedness one should have. And you wrote it with impeccable connection. Thank you for sharing this...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Lovely and meaningful thoughts well-shared, Karen. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|The beauty of your heart shines bright....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Karen, Right to the point, poignant.