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| Reviewed by Carissa Brookens |
6/26/2003 |
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Jimmy,
Awesome message here.
Now if people would read it
And possibly think about it.
Keep it up, sir!
~CJ |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
6/25/2003 |
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| Good thoughts, good points, very good poem!!! |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
6/17/2003 |
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| This is too true! But you found the perfect words to get your point across. Great write Jimmy,,,~SH~ |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
6/17/2003 |
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| Now isn't this the truth!! Great poem. |
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| Reviewed by Angelica Young |
6/16/2003 |
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Wow This is a great Write Based on the sad truth. Couldn't have been expressed better! :)
Love Angie |
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| Reviewed by Linda Murray |
6/16/2003 |
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| Truth is sometimes hard to bare but bare it they must. For to father a child is not for just one night. It's for a lifetime. Wonderfully written and profound. |
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| Reviewed by Nate Ashton (Reader) |
6/16/2003 |
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| Such a shame. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
6/16/2003 |
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Jimmy,
this is so profound.
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) |
6/16/2003 |
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| Wonderful thought .... |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
6/16/2003 |
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OH yeah... too heartwrenching, and something too many have to deal with...I agree with Elizabeth...smiles..
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/16/2003 |
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(((jimmy)))
heartbreaking write...this one rips at the soul...
(((((HUGS))))) and love,
karla. *tears* |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
6/16/2003 |
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Hi Jimmy,
Well, This is telling
it like it is...
Powerful write...
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
6/16/2003 |
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| Indeed. Brain cells shifted too low in the body. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/16/2003 |
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| heartwrenching! :( (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
6/16/2003 |
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This was excellent Jimmy, and so many need to hear this, I loved the truth you have expressed here, Well done Jim!
Rein |
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