|Reviewed by Carissa Brookens
Awesome message here.
Now if people would read it
And possibly think about it.
Keep it up, sir!
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Good thoughts, good points, very good poem!!!|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|This is too true! But you found the perfect words to get your point across. Great write Jimmy,,,~SH~|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Now isn't this the truth!! Great poem.|
|Reviewed by Angelica Young
|Wow This is a great Write Based on the sad truth. Couldn't have been expressed better! :)
|Reviewed by Linda Murray
|Truth is sometimes hard to bare but bare it they must. For to father a child is not for just one night. It's for a lifetime. Wonderfully written and profound.|
|Reviewed by Nate Ashton (Reader)
|Such a shame.|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
this is so profound.
|Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
|Wonderful thought ....|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|OH yeah... too heartwrenching, and something too many have to deal with...I agree with Elizabeth...smiles..
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
heartbreaking write...this one rips at the soul...
(((((HUGS))))) and love,
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Well, This is telling
it like it is...
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Indeed. Brain cells shifted too low in the body. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|heartwrenching! :( (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was excellent Jimmy, and so many need to hear this, I loved the truth you have expressed here, Well done Jim!