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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
1/18/2004 |
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This was excellent Jim, I loved what you had to say here, so true!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
10/15/2003 |
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Displaying your shield of happiness
To the public’s eye
Knowing that deep in your abyss
Lies an everlasting cry
Indeed this applies to myself..how did you KNOW?...:)
Insightful write TY
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
10/8/2003 |
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| Excellent truthful poem! ~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Currin (Reader) |
10/7/2003 |
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Hey J,
I really loved this poem. So true and straight to the point. I am trying to slow down and enjoy mine more. |
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
10/5/2003 |
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| Nicely done! |
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