|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was excellent Jim, I loved what you had to say here, so true!
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|Displaying your shield of happiness
To the public’s eye
Knowing that deep in your abyss
Lies an everlasting cry
Indeed this applies to myself..how did you KNOW?...:)
Insightful write TY
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Excellent truthful poem! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by Michelle Currin (Reader)
I really loved this poem. So true and straight to the point. I am trying to slow down and enjoy mine more.
|Reviewed by JimmyHolder ShyPoet1