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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
7/31/2005 |
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An impressionist-symbolistical teleological poem that blends
the emotions of ontologic structure and shows the picture
of surreal thoughts.
Reading this author means building minds and walking through the
bridge of revelation.
Thank You, Poet, for showing the world what
American Fine Letters mean.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
3/1/2005 |
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WOW!!!
Am I glad you left a comment on my poetry so that I could discover yours!
This is a tremendous piece of work, Mizzlady....and a most beautiful poetic explanation of prophecy about to come to pass.
I LOVE your bio pic. I have been a blues lover all my life, and KOKO's CDs sit proudly on my shelves along with some of my other favorites like Albert King, Etta James, Otis Spann, and so on and so forth. I love to sing, and play blues, as well.
So happy I have found another fantastic poet on Authors Den! |
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| Reviewed by Russ Okamura |
2/25/2005 |
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| This poem is profound. You have great insight written within this very intelligent write. This was very awesome to read, I loved it. |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
2/24/2005 |
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I would prefer this to be titled "She knows" Zee. But the divine (whatever gender) cannot intervene as it only works through us.
best
Ian |
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| Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) |
2/23/2005 |
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| Armageddon may not be what's expected. An excellent write MizzLady. I love that last line.. "He waits no more". |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/23/2005 |
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i wonder how his waiting will pay off when the lunatics are at play ...
an eye-opening poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/23/2005 |
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| Reminds me of a verse I used in one of my poems, "on the edge of beyond." You poem leaves one anticipating, wondering, a little edgy. Well done. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
2/23/2005 |
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Mizzlady,
Great picture - always good to see the writer ... this is one exceptional poem - love how you ended each verse: "yes...he knows." Wonderful poem!!
Best wishes,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
2/23/2005 |
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| It does feel like we're on the verge of something cataclysmic... |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/23/2005 |
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| ME? I am not waiting for anything...life goes on...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
2/23/2005 |
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Boy, phropetic poetry here, Mizzlady.
"earth's tepid soul" astounding phrase! |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/23/2005 |
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| It seems that we are all now waiting - for something to happen - an extremely chilling write, Mizzlady. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
2/23/2005 |
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| Ah, yes, He knows, but a lot of us sit and silently wonder if He knows what man does do man, why does He not intervene. He is biding His time. In the menatime all hell is breaking loose on the planet. There are wars and rumors of wars. There are climatic changes, i.e., tornados in Claifornia. There are despicable human beings allowed to walk this earth with no checks and balances in place. Alpha and omega to merge and all will lie down with the lion. I am waiting. Sorry about the semi-rant, couldn't help it. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
2/23/2005 |
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| You have shed light on He Knows. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/23/2005 |
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Excellent work Zeneth!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/22/2005 |
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Z~ this is haunting, the style and subject seem to grip the senses and chill the bones...Excellent work!
Eileen |
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