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Lessons Learned, Wrong
by Zenith Elliott

Sunday, December 23, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I taught you many things for life

Like riding bikes

To read and write


I wanted you to reach high goals

Drive new cars

A brand new home


I made sure you had the best

Designer clothes

Money to spend


I taught you family was everything

To say thank you

Good morals and to pray


Now I’m gone from this earth

You have attained

Material worth


The homes

The cars

The clothes

The cash


Ignoring family

Appreciating self

Immoral doctrine

You idolize well


Scattering tears

As you walk away

Forsaking all

That matter most


The lessons I taught you taken wrong.


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Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry 2/15/2009
Awesome, my daughter! And, sadly, too often true. And, sometimes, our motives as a parent are honorable but, perhaps, too much emphasis got put on the "success" of worldly things instead of "success" of spiritual matters. We do our best during a time when we didn't realize there really was a parent manual: the Holy Bible. Same for marriages, too.

As usual, you are a master poetess, my darling Zenith!

Much luv & hugs, MomB
Reviewed by kamal kapoor (Reader) 11/30/2008
good... the story of every doting parent...
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 12/27/2007
wow soul stirring I am finding it is not enuf to teach our children we need to test them as well
excellent thought-provoking piece for us parents set-up situation for your children and see if they respone the way you taught them and if not then you know which way to go

a must read
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 12/24/2007
A fine rendering & Merry Christmas to you, young lady...Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 12/23/2007
These situations can happen to anyone and unfortunately you are not too aware until it is too late. All one can do is their best, that is all. Just heartbreaking when it happens to you.....

Be safe,
Reviewed by Art Sun 12/23/2007
A nice reflection of thoughts on the ways of learning and wisdom grasped yet not understood...the responsibility of parents can only teach...

nice work...

Art Sun...
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 12/23/2007
Sooo glad to read you again
Sad, we raise them the best right way we can
They either love self or let a partner turn
them against their own family like one of my
daughters did.
Who knows how our kids will turn out?
Have a wonderful Christmas and New Year Zenith
With love,
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 12/23/2007

A lesson to strike good sense... "Lessons Learned, Wrong" glows.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

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