by Kerry Compton aka Star Girl
Saturday, March 01, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Written some time ago.....
Cold, dark nothingness
Hard, gray steel laid
Empty, lonely, angry
Sad, alone, afraid
Heart beats so unfeeling
Fear, my only way
Not knowing of what demon
I come to face this day
So lost and so alone
Heart and feelings bound
A frightened shattered child
Longing to be found....
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Yeah. I can relate to this as well. Powerfully symbolic images you have created to awaken emotions deep. Thank you, Star Girl. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
|I can relate...you have found a door outside of your prison with your words...keep writing...great job expressing those feelings|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Open that cage little birdie and fly, fly once again.
Love duffs up all fear.
You have heaps to give.... So you gotta get giving, you never know what may come back...
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|All too often in life we have times when we feel as this poem describes, there never seems to be a way out, any parole and no time off for good behavior but...
when we do finally find ourselves free again we quickly forget the prison and struggle on with life and love.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
Being trapped within oneself can leave a person with those feelings. Excellent description of depression. Light, Love, Blessings and Happiness Always, Paul.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I hope has been found!
WE rise from our rubble~! Grinning... happily...
Love your expressive heart/soul! STAR/Kerry
Great expressively written poem!
WELOME to A/D -
Hope you take a walk through my open door!
I write all genre's- Muse inspired!
The Sun will shine again...
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheoooxoo