The Best of Me
by Lisa Davis Budzinski
Wednesday, March 02, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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No matter how hard you try you will never get the best of me.
I have the will-power to out last.
Strength and determination no to be beat down and stay down.
I can tell when you are trying to build up a bigger army of bad cells
to attack and overtake all the good ones
Running around causing complete havoc inside of me.
You continually throw all you have at me
and at times you do get a few good knocks in,
laying me up for days on end.
Make no mistake, I am stronger and I WILL always win.
You and your other auto-immune friends should know by now,
I will always put up a good fight and through fierce determination
I will soldier on and with my best defenses
I will never allow you to get the best of me.
At the End of the Day
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|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Whatever the pain (and only a fool would think they know)such focus and aspiration to overcome will always render the subject proud and worthy of respect. Were you to be another victim, a "whoa is me" cliche, certain readers would abandon your need to express.|
|Reviewed by Paul Judges
|Well written poem, Lisa|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You are a shining example of positive expression and attitude, Lisa. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Lisa, Good for you! Like all things in life,
we have to fight for it, especially our health.
You have shown what a fighter you are...for
you have WON!
|Reviewed by Lisa Budzinski
I agree. Positive reinforcements are what's needed! Keep on the positive track and you'll be shining every day!
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Positive attitudes, i like to read about, my life needs those things in my life at present. Or i get so depressed can hardly live with myself/|
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|Each day is a victory- your life force shines.