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Oh shut up...
by Lonnie McAllister

Sunday, March 23, 2003

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From a while back... A fit of unspoken rage...

Oh shut up my sweet darling
I値l tell you what to do
You need to break it now baby
These links that cling to you
Unmeld your ties
Unbind your pains
They dangle helplessly
These balls these chains
Strike them hard
Cut swift cut through
All that hides your eyes
And my love from you
With a big cleaver axe
Give them a good smack
You don稚 need them now
They池e holding you back
But if you must insist
To sport this old wear
I promise you this
My sweet loving dear...

I値l be your ball
I値l be your chain
I値l make you smile
I値l cause you no pain
I値l roll around happy
I値l be so true
I値l do anything
I値l dangle with you...

So shut up my sweet darling
And give me a kiss
With you I promise a life of bliss
I know you love me
You know I love you
So get off your ass
And make this come true ...


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Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 3/27/2003
hee hee hee, I like this, a lot. ;)

JC xoxoxo
Reviewed by (Reader) 3/24/2003
I love it, straight to the point and with a little humor too. It's great.....Ma
Reviewed by Shelley Lockey Wells 3/23/2003
Dear Sweet Mac (Lonnie)...
This piece is sensational.
Others that read it may like it...but only I know what you were able to sum up, these words I will forever cherish.
And yes, I know...
I am posting something new tonight.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 3/23/2003
Fun write
I'll shut up now, hee, hee......
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/23/2003
meow...someone's throwin' a hissy! :) good one...how many times i wanted to tell my sweetie to shut up! LOL you said what many people wish they had the courage to say...well done! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Josephine Bohen 3/23/2003
thats tellin em
josie
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/23/2003
Heh heh heh....good one Lonnie..Floria
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/23/2003
Cute one.
~E
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/23/2003
Ha! This was excellent, just loved it!

Reindeer
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