by Susan D. Reeves
Wednesday, November 24, 2010
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A poem written in the pit of hopelessness.
I want to cry,
I want to die.
I don’t want to be this way anymore.
I want to heal,
I want to feel
and something more.
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|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Well done. Many thoughts come to mind with the brevity of just a few lines.|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Those same feelings can apply to many things going on in a persons life...welcome to AD Susan
|Reviewed by John Silkstone
|A poem that says it all
|Reviewed by Richard Orey
|Just like a woman: Never satisfied.
There's a German Wisdom of Life (displayed in my posting of "Lebensweisheiten") that says something like: "No matter what your circumstance in life--good or bad--it will change."
Of course the one good thing about being "in the pit of hopelessness" is that most likely the change will be for the better.
I know you're a novelist, Susan, but I'm glad to see you post a poem. We get to hear from you much more frequently with poetry postings.