Rewind time
by baz busbe
Thursday, December 29, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Its that time of year again, the start of another year but sometimes i wish we could turn back time. Wishing you all a good year ahead, keep up the writing. God bless you all. |
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Stop the clock and rewind time
back to when you were mine
back to when my world was right
when new year was full of light
Why do days turn into years
why does time ignore my tears
why does the world carry on
surely it knows you are gone
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
1/7/2012 |
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| THERE IS AN OLD CLICHE' THAT I KNOW YOU'VE HEARD BEFORE, IT GOES LIKE THIS; WE CAN'T SAVE SPLIT MILK. AFTER READING THIS TOUCHING WORK, I WISH YOU COULD AND I AM SO VERY SORRY THAT YOU CAN'T. BUT, IT IS A NEW YEAR! AND WITH GOD BY YOUR SIDE, YOU'VE ALREADY GOT THE VICTORY! WELL DONE, BAZ, AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING...LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
12/31/2011 |
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baz,
This is so heart wrenching. I'm so sorry for your loss. May you have peace in the New Year.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
12/30/2011 |
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| This is so sad. Knot knowing if "you are gone" means just gone away or gone as in death. Either way, it can have the same effect upon one who loved the one gone. |
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