|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Your refreshing voice is more than welcome here at Author's Den; you're among friends. :) Welcome!
And what a write this is--clever imagery, beautifully metered and rhymed verse, BRAVA! :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Welcome, poet! Your poem floats in that nether between awake and sleep, just as I oft do. You captured it well. My salute to you.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Blimey I must have dozed off in the twilight to have missed this delightful perfectly formed rhythmic penn.
|Reviewed by Steve Patterson
|WOW!!! EXCELLENT POETRY. wording, rhyme, rhythmn, --very very nice (i'm damn near envious). thank you for sharing the read.
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This is such a beautiful poem of the movement of time through the changing seasons. Your rhyme unforced and wonderful, Joni, the flow smooth and gentle, your images strong and clear. This is just exceptional writing.
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|This is a wonderful poem. It sounds like one of the classics. The subject matter mirrored my feelings about the seasons. Great write. Janet|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Beautifully flowing verses. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace, Regis.|
|Reviewed by . ShyPoet1
|I agree, you can really turn a phrase!
I had so much fun ....
Thank you ...
Let me re-read this gem ...
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|the poem have great rhythm. and the iamages are supurb.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Love this poem. Glad I found you.|
|Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
|Good verse, NO! Great! Thanks!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Great flow, excellent verse.....|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|'A poet dreams with silver pen' Lovely. Really enjoyed this.|
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Yeah, language raises us above the animals. Well written with strong rhymes and good imagery.
But "small town gal" suggests you are American. What a disappointment. With a name like Joni Stewart - Hague you ought to live in one of Englands rural conties but also have a pied a terre in Chelsea of course ;)
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Wonderful flow and very beautiful verse.
|Reviewed by Angelica Young
|THIS IS FANTASTIC! such great verses. :)|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|I agree with James. This flows so beautifully.
|Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
|This is an exceptional piece of writing!|
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|This just rolls off the tongue.