|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|hate changing tire
loved this piece
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Well, Franz. You braved the stinky bubbly even on a Sunday morning... I learned a lot from this experience. Thanks for describing it so vividly.
Best to you, always.
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Extra humorous poetic write - clever and exceptional work!!
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|This is all so funny but not funny I know. Nothing worse well there is but flat tires are no fun. Thank goodness for todays inventions huh? So You could enjoy your sunny Sun day.
Thank You You are great!
Sunny days everyday!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thanks for the humor, Franz. I can relate to this. I've been fortunate over the years with cars but you never know... Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|hahahaha interesting,funny story/poem
|Reviewed by jude forese
|cars can drive you crazy ...
very nicely penned ...
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|A victory is a victory. Nice write.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Fun descriptive write :-)|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A fun look at how your car tried to ruin your day
but you wouldn't let it! Determined to have your
Sunday get-away! Victory for the lazy man;-)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|excellent stuff, franz! you sure do tell a good story! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|This is like a journal entry. An interesting look at your day with all of it's ups and downs, irritating little disappointments. Good write.|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|This is pretty darn good and like my husband thanks for an entertaining write.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|There is nothing more annoying than a flat tire...unless it's a dead battery..
I'm glad to know your quick-fix worked..hope you enjoyed your Sunday getaway!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I can feel both the sheer pain of discovery, and the sheer joy, when it finally worked, Franz!|