|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Thought provoking, with vivid images........M|
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|Is this the way it is?
Are we lonely drifting in the sunset breeze?
Like shiny color-coated spheres?
Your imagery in adjectives used for this piece is why I love to read the work of others. No way this could come from a "poetry class." I came from your own perceptions of what is, what was, and what can-be.
Thank you Bro Franz,
cynth'ya lewis reed
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite a deep write, Franz - and I love your last stanza.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|Sagacious insight permeates the intent of this powerful poetic assay ... very nicely written!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|deep nostalgic thoughts Franz! Seeing the world
as it is, can be dangerous to our health!;-)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Great thoughts to share :-)|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|"anchored with love and courage..."
Ahhh...Franz...the secret of life itself.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Wisdom and truth emanated from this poetic offering, Franz. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis|