|Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas
|Wow Debra - this one says alot to me.|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Debra this is a very chilling piece. It sent chills up my spine. Very good write tho. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|You have captured an illusive feeling, perfectly.|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
love the feeling here
real, raw, unpolished like great
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Haunting poem beautifully written, Mister! Sad that we
meet such moments in life, but I think we all do, at times.
good to see you ;-)Eileen
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
"when even in my sleep
i find myself walking
in desolate streets..." <---this opening just begs the reader to continue--brilliant!
such loneliness and bitterness in these lines--emotionally charged, excellent write! BRAVA!
nice to see you again--hope 2005 is your best year EVER!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Sandy Knauer
|I really like this... but then that means I must like to hurt?
I've had that lost feeling, where home is really a place in the heart that was missing for a time, and you brought that feeling true to life again for me. Very nice job.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I think we all search for that 'perfect place,' especially in our dreams.|