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| Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas |
12/31/2005 |
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| Wow Debra - this one says alot to me. |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
3/15/2005 |
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Debra this is a very chilling piece. It sent chills up my spine. Very good write tho. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
"If I have to...Then I may as well be." |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
1/10/2005 |
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| You have captured an illusive feeling, perfectly. |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
1/7/2005 |
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Original indeed
love the feeling here
real, raw, unpolished like great
pieces are |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/5/2005 |
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Haunting poem beautifully written, Mister! Sad that we
meet such moments in life, but I think we all do, at times.
good to see you ;-)Eileen
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
1/5/2005 |
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mister,
"when even in my sleep
i find myself walking
in desolate streets..." <---this opening just begs the reader to continue--brilliant!
such loneliness and bitterness in these lines--emotionally charged, excellent write! BRAVA!
nice to see you again--hope 2005 is your best year EVER!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
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| Reviewed by Sandy Knauer |
1/5/2005 |
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I really like this... but then that means I must like to hurt?
I've had that lost feeling, where home is really a place in the heart that was missing for a time, and you brought that feeling true to life again for me. Very nice job. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/5/2005 |
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| I think we all search for that 'perfect place,' especially in our dreams. |
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