The Hands Of Time
by Debra J Stiles, The Original Mister
Friday, December 15, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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The hands of time move so fast
Leaving behind a distant past
Stealing the moment is its task
With the swaying of the pendulum
And the softness of the chime
It travels swiftly passing through time
Leaving foot prints of memories behind
I stole a moment as it passed
Refusing to let it slip away
The minute the moment the day
And for ever in my heart you will always stay
“The Original Mister”
"The Original Mister"(TM)
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|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Mister...a super lister.
Enjoyed. Time moves on, and waits for no one. What we keep in our hearts is the immortality of time.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Time does seem to be moving on...ironic how when we were children and couldn't wait to grow up, it seemed to take forever...once we finally arrive, well it's like a roller coaster ride, it moves faster as it moves forward. Enjoyed your write and reading your bio. Glad I stopped by.
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Time does move quickly at times and so it is to enjoy the moments for soon moments will be time...passed...
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|And don't we always say years later, "where did the time go?" I can still my face one morning when I was 3, and now it is 55 years later. Where did the time go? Yes ol' Father Time surely steals moments as he passes by. If you go to bed some night, and find out when you wake up that it is 20 years later, you'll know that Father Time has been there. :P
Thank you Mister for this reflection of how time just flies by.
Merry Christmas, Mister, to you and your family and loved ones, and a very Happy New Year too.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFULSISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Babrie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar
|Hands move and so does the time, on one another. A wonderful work, Debra!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Thought provoking write!!
|Reviewed by J M
|Debra this is a beautiful poem and so well expressed.
Light & peace,
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|This is so mind provoking...leaving the reader to ponder beyond your words!
Very well done...
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|Very nice, Debra. Soft, flowing, again very nice work.