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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
8/4/2003 |
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I love poems about keys and hearts... this is great. I liked the read :)
Thanks,
Emilie |
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| Reviewed by The Gentle Man |
6/16/2003 |
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| Hope you won't have to wait too long before someone claims your heart again.....smile Enjoyed your poem! |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
6/15/2003 |
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| Serenety it's better to try at love and fail than to never tried love at all out of fear. You'll brush yourself off and ride again sooner or later. It's easy to make it when times are good, but can you deal effectively when times are bad and sad. Love yourself and know that love takes, then gives, then takes. It's a cycle that might end, we all just do our best. GEM |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
6/10/2003 |
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| excellant write |
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| Reviewed by richard poor |
6/8/2003 |
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| ahhh,very good! chase your dreams not men... |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
6/8/2003 |
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| Your poem was divine .....so serene flowing with beauty |
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| Reviewed by William M. Sowman |
6/8/2003 |
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| Serenety...you have such a loving heart and it shows in this sweet presentation. I am sure you will not be lonely for long. You have so much to give someone. And he probably is reading your poetry and sighing at this moment. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) |
6/7/2003 |
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| Nicely done, Serenity! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
6/6/2003 |
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Beautiful poem, Serenity. It moved me
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/5/2003 |
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Next time we must use "Jaillocks"...with spare keys made in advance......lol!!
Know this feeling all to well!!
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/5/2003 |
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Hold the key to your own heart and guard it wisely. Good write.
You must be using the authorsden's "Editor", click that off and don't use it, type into the box with plain text and you'll be okay.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by The Voice (Reader) |
6/5/2003 |
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Serenety,
Great write. Hold those keys, the sunshine is on the way to burn off the fog and wipe out the dark clouds.
Hugs,
The Voice
I write in word, then copy and paste to here.
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
6/5/2003 |
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Hi Serenety, Beautiful poetry!
tony |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
6/5/2003 |
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This was beautiful and so touching, I loved this,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/5/2003 |
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| excellent writ! Serenity do you put your work on notepad? that's where I do mine then I copy and paste and you shouldn't have a problem Also, you can use your backspace on each line when your in the AD editor it should bring it to where you want it. |
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| Reviewed by serenety L |
6/5/2003 |
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| Hello everybody. I still have these huge gaps between my lines. Some have as well, some seem to be able to write normal. Any idea what I can do. Thanks. S. |
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