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Tu es ma vie
by serenety L

Friday, June 27, 2003

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Kisses of fire
eyes of desire
lifting me higher
higher above


words so sweet
touch full of need
two hearts that beat
united in love


don't let it end
please take my hand
show me the land
of ecstasy


where we can be
united and free
mon amour, mon cheri
you and me


jusqu'au fin de la vie!


 

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Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 6/29/2003
I love the French language. never learned how to speak it much though. Nice poem. G
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader) 6/28/2003
Melodious and in love..This write sings to me.. You did well.. michael
Reviewed by William Bonilla 6/28/2003
Serenity, this is a most beautiful poem
excellent write

William
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 6/28/2003
what a beautiful write...love n luck....BHUWAN
Reviewed by The Voice (Reader) 6/27/2003
Serenety,
Just what the doctor ordered. Beautiful thoughts of walking holding hands and sharing the land of ecstasy.

Hugs,
The Voice
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 6/27/2003
Hi Serenety,

This is quite beautiful. I like the way you have threaded english with French into the poem. It makes it even more romantic.

~Sara
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/27/2003
Serenity, a real gem, beautifully crafted!
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 6/27/2003
This is beautiful, Serenety! Enjoyed it!
Jill
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 6/27/2003
This was beautiful, I loved it!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 6/27/2003
Fantastic write, my new friend!
Reviewed by nevine Al Seidi (Reader) 6/27/2003
Et, c'est magnifique, Cherie!

Nevine
Reviewed by Dove (Reader) 6/27/2003
{{{Serenity}}}}}
this was way beyond beautiful..!!!I'm tracking your work now..Hope you'll check out a few of my short stories..

Love,
Dove
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 6/27/2003
Exquisite poem captured well
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/27/2003
(((serenety)))

this is so beautiful--tres bon! merci!

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 6/27/2003
Sweet one.
Reviewed by Christine Morell 6/27/2003
A gorgeous poem, Serenity. Beautifully written
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight* 6/27/2003
Nicolette,

This is stunning ... truly my favourite of yours now! Very romantic.

~Joseph
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 6/27/2003
Wow
Reviewed by Dale Clark 6/27/2003
Beautiful Cheri! ;) I wish I could speak french.
Reviewed by serenety L 6/27/2003
besides, Paul:
Cheri means darling !!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 6/27/2003
Lovely and romantic.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/27/2003
Tu es my vie."
jusqu'au fin de la vie!

Nicely done----You are my life."
To the end of life!!

melikes

Love
Tinka
Reviewed by Paul Berube 6/27/2003
serenety L. Love your poem and the French makes it even more passionate.

Tu es my vie
Tu es mon vie
( You are my life )
mon amour, mon cheri
( my love, my dear )
jusqu'au fin de la vie!
( until the end of time )
Hope you didn't mind me translating. Really love reading your poetry.





Reviewed by na na (Reader) 6/27/2003
Beautiful Serenety. !Amore brillante adentro su corazon para alguien muy especial! Encantado con tu poesia! Bill
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