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What I need.......
by serenety L

Wednesday, July 02, 2003

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What I need is


not an idiot
but someone
who let me be free on my own
being comfortable with me
while we are together
acknowledging me
but also taking control, if necessary
without disregarding me
and
most of all


someone who


really, really loves me


Anybody out there who matches that description??


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Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/16/2003
You will find each other for sure.
Excellent write........
Reviewed by The Gentle Man 8/4/2003
very well done....thanks for sharing!
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 7/14/2003

These words do bleed human emotion. I enjoyed bleeding mine while reading. You did an excellent job here. Me needs too :)

Thanks,
Emilie
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 7/8/2003
I'm sure he is probably looking for you and saying the same thing. Very nice write Serenety!

Jack
Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader) 7/7/2003
You can certainly read most of our minds.. Super write and subject.. What if the one you love cant see is clouded by their pride.. It is why we all need to be their for ourselves..This is a beginning to sharing..Sorry...Great Write..All the best..michael
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 7/6/2003
Good write maybe he's out there somewhere's
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/3/2003
This was wonderful, feeling it so deeply tonight! ask if he has a brother when you find him okay..loved this!

Reindeer
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 7/3/2003
7-0303

Learn to Love One Self 1st_ and, True Love(Compassion) Will Follow In Due Time_

What You Write You Don't Have To Hope People Read It,i.e. When You Know It You Don't Have To Show It_ I, They Will Read It_

Thank You All Your Great Reviews...

TRASK
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 7/3/2003
Hey Serenety !!! Join my club...now what shall we call it...mmmmm..perhaps the gents on this site may give a suggestion...LOL
C'on guys roll 'em in...er...suggestions I mean...

Vesna
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight* 7/3/2003
Nico,

You are not asking for too much ... only what you deserve ... I hope you find.

~Joseph
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 7/3/2003
Hope you find the man of your dream lady.
NOW PLEASE CELEBRATE THE FOURTH WITH ME.
Bill Murray

http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewpoetry.asp?id=68051
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 7/3/2003
There must be!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/3/2003
I thought you found ME??? Jakes Cakes!!Jokingly!! < < <Smiles>>>
Know Tha feeling.....no need to tell you already know THAT????????

love
tinka
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 7/3/2003
Truely a classic write...enjoyed much....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Paul Berube 7/3/2003
serenety L. Someday your prince will come. I just hope he doesn't turn out to be the court jester.(lol) Look for the guy sitting high on a white steed. Set your sights high, your worth it.
Reviewed by Dale Clark 7/3/2003
Hopefully for someone special like you, Yes!
Reviewed by jude forese 7/2/2003
he's probably saying the same thing...
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 7/2/2003
You never know.
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 7/2/2003
someone is out there for you
Reviewed by Trixie Love 7/2/2003
When you least expect it...Love will come knocking onyor hearts door..

Trixie :)
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 7/2/2003
Yeah that is all I need too, and maybe a little wee bit more. *GRIN*
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 7/2/2003
May that person bring you joy when he comes into your life.
Reviewed by richard poor 7/2/2003
yes...there is some-one wating for you!
Reviewed by William Bonilla 7/2/2003
That'l be me.......lol joking
An excellent write
said it all

William
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 7/2/2003
(((o, serenety)))

i hope you find him...i was always told to not look...that's when love will find you

'course, i haven't been lookin for 17 years NEVER MIND LOL

siggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i hope you find him i ain't found mine yet

wonder if i ever will??? heartfelt and beautiful write

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 7/2/2003
He'll come, you'll see! Excellent in expression...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/2/2003
Hang in there Serenety!.....for you just might find someone...

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Christine Morell 7/2/2003
lovely and heartfelt, Serenety :)
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/2/2003
awwwwww.....heartfelt write! i love ya, and jesus does too! never forget that! (((((HUGS)))))) :)
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