|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Can't change the old past, but we can have a wonderfuil future. Got me thinking for sure...|
|Reviewed by Patrick Cassidy (Reader)
|I liked that piece. Depth within simplicity|
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|....A heart speaks. This is beautiful and sad! I enjoyed it one in the same. Been there, done that. 'Tis the reason why a reader can relate and enjoy :)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|put you mind and heart to it and you can accomplish anything...|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Nico, maybe you can't so make sure as you go forward you don't repeat the past. love your poem. G|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh how this one just speaks to my heart, so beautifully sad, I loved this,
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Wish and wish upon a star serenety, then put
the regrets in a jar and send them all out to see. We can never take it back. No matter how we want to. Bill Murray
|Reviewed by Linda Murray
|This too is my wish at times. So now I try to think before I say, write or do. It works sometimes. Then other times my mouth always gets me in trouble. Let me know how you learn to cope with this.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Vry good write..yeah...if only....|
|Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl
|Omagosh, this should be my mantra!|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Yes "if only", but then there is no if only so we must trudge on!
Great Write Serenety!
|Reviewed by The Gentle Man
|Oh how life would change if we had the power to undo mistakes....smile|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
You're not alone. We all feel like this at one time or another. Wonderful expression!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
You Can't Wish,Hope Nor Pray, But You can_
Make Best Of What You've Got Today!!!
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
I agree..."If Only"
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|How great would that be?;-) you speak for us all Serenity, well done!|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|A nice, expressive piece, Serenety ..you share the wishes of so many.
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Nice write Serenety! Wouldnt it be great if we could?! I too wrote a poem on this subject, "Words" check it out if you get a chance.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Oh if only! But we must deal with as is. Great little write of large thoughts.|
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|I wish that, too...it would make life much simpler. But, how would we learn from life without its mistakes?
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Yip this is so true my friend......and even words you did not write in the first place...but landed with the wrong name attached!! That's when I wish I could kill the one who did it to me!!
But remember God does not sleep........He knows Better.....Okay!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|at times i wish things were different, but i am also glad that i am who i am today! i am always told to stop living in the past, and to go on; but it is hard to forget the past sometimes. i have to work on this myself. good write, serenety! (((HUGS))) p.s.: check out my newest stories; think y'all will like 'em! :)|
|Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
|It's when we stare at the past that we step in a pile of poop. Always look forward, it makes for a brighter future (and cleaner shoes)
|Reviewed by Amy Hodge (Reader)
|I often think about this too. I wish I could! Just remember don't wish your life away!!! Good write! **Amy**|
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Me too. You cut right to the heart of things. If only...|