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I wished
by serenety L

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I wished I could turn back time

make words unsaid
make sentences unwritten
make things undone
make misunderstandings vanish

just once in my life

I wished I could....


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Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/16/2003
Can't change the old past, but we can have a wonderfuil future. Got me thinking for sure...
Reviewed by Patrick Cassidy (Reader) 7/19/2003
I liked that piece. Depth within simplicity
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 7/14/2003
....A heart speaks. This is beautiful and sad! I enjoyed it one in the same. Been there, done that. 'Tis the reason why a reader can relate and enjoy :)

Reviewed by jude forese 7/11/2003
put you mind and heart to it and you can accomplish anything...
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 7/10/2003
Nico, maybe you can't so make sure as you go forward you don't repeat the past. love your poem. G
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 7/9/2003
Oh how this one just speaks to my heart, so beautifully sad, I loved this,

Reviewed by na na (Reader) 7/9/2003
Wish and wish upon a star serenety, then put
the regrets in a jar and send them all out to see. We can never take it back. No matter how we want to. Bill Murray
Reviewed by Linda Murray 7/8/2003
This too is my wish at times. So now I try to think before I say, write or do. It works sometimes. Then other times my mouth always gets me in trouble. Let me know how you learn to cope with this.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 7/8/2003
Vry good write..yeah...if only....
Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl 7/8/2003
Omagosh, this should be my mantra!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 7/8/2003
Yes "if only", but then there is no if only so we must trudge on!
Great Write Serenety!
Reviewed by The Gentle Man 7/8/2003
Oh how life would change if we had the power to undo
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/8/2003
Hi serenity:

You're not alone. We all feel like this at one time or another. Wonderful expression!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 7/8/2003

You Can't Wish,Hope Nor Pray, But You can_
Make Best Of What You've Got Today!!!

Reviewed by Trixie Love 7/8/2003
Hi Serenity,
I agree..."If Only"

Great write...

Trixie :)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/8/2003
How great would that be?;-) you speak for us all Serenity, well done!
Reviewed by Christine Morell 7/8/2003
A nice, expressive piece, Serenety share the wishes of so many.
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 7/8/2003
Nice write Serenety! Wouldnt it be great if we could?! I too wrote a poem on this subject, "Words" check it out if you get a chance.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 7/8/2003
Oh if only! But we must deal with as is. Great little write of large thoughts.
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 7/8/2003
I wish that, would make life much simpler. But, how would we learn from life without its mistakes?

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/8/2003
Yip this is so true my friend......and even words you did not write in the first place...but landed with the wrong name attached!! That's when I wish I could kill the one who did it to me!!
But remember God does not sleep........He knows Better.....Okay!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/8/2003
at times i wish things were different, but i am also glad that i am who i am today! i am always told to stop living in the past, and to go on; but it is hard to forget the past sometimes. i have to work on this myself. good write, serenety! (((HUGS))) p.s.: check out my newest stories; think y'all will like 'em! :)
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) 7/8/2003
It's when we stare at the past that we step in a pile of poop. Always look forward, it makes for a brighter future (and cleaner shoes)
Reviewed by Amy Hodge (Reader) 7/8/2003
I often think about this too. I wish I could! Just remember don't wish your life away!!! Good write! **Amy**
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 7/8/2003
Me too. You cut right to the heart of things. If only...

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