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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
9/16/2003 |
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| Can't change the old past, but we can have a wonderfuil future. Got me thinking for sure... |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Cassidy (Reader) |
7/19/2003 |
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| I liked that piece. Depth within simplicity |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
7/14/2003 |
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....A heart speaks. This is beautiful and sad! I enjoyed it one in the same. Been there, done that. 'Tis the reason why a reader can relate and enjoy :)
Thanks,
Emilie |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/11/2003 |
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| put you mind and heart to it and you can accomplish anything... |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
7/10/2003 |
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| Nico, maybe you can't so make sure as you go forward you don't repeat the past. love your poem. G |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
7/9/2003 |
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Oh how this one just speaks to my heart, so beautifully sad, I loved this,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
7/9/2003 |
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Wish and wish upon a star serenety, then put
the regrets in a jar and send them all out to see. We can never take it back. No matter how we want to. Bill Murray |
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| Reviewed by Linda Murray |
7/8/2003 |
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| This too is my wish at times. So now I try to think before I say, write or do. It works sometimes. Then other times my mouth always gets me in trouble. Let me know how you learn to cope with this. |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
7/8/2003 |
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| Vry good write..yeah...if only.... |
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| Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl |
7/8/2003 |
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| Omagosh, this should be my mantra! |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
7/8/2003 |
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Yes "if only", but then there is no if only so we must trudge on!
Great Write Serenety!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by The Gentle Man |
7/8/2003 |
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| Oh how life would change if we had the power to undo mistakes....smile |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
7/8/2003 |
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Hi serenity:
You're not alone. We all feel like this at one time or another. Wonderful expression!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
7/8/2003 |
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7-08-03
You Can't Wish,Hope Nor Pray, But You can_
Make Best Of What You've Got Today!!!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
7/8/2003 |
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Hi Serenity,
I agree..."If Only"
Great write...
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/8/2003 |
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| How great would that be?;-) you speak for us all Serenity, well done! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
7/8/2003 |
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A nice, expressive piece, Serenety ..you share the wishes of so many.
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
7/8/2003 |
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Nice write Serenety! Wouldnt it be great if we could?! I too wrote a poem on this subject, "Words" check it out if you get a chance.
Jack |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
7/8/2003 |
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| Oh if only! But we must deal with as is. Great little write of large thoughts. |
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| Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) |
7/8/2003 |
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I wish that, too...it would make life much simpler. But, how would we learn from life without its mistakes?
{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}} |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/8/2003 |
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Yip this is so true my friend......and even words you did not write in the first place...but landed with the wrong name attached!! That's when I wish I could kill the one who did it to me!!
But remember God does not sleep........He knows Better.....Okay!!
Love
Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/8/2003 |
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| at times i wish things were different, but i am also glad that i am who i am today! i am always told to stop living in the past, and to go on; but it is hard to forget the past sometimes. i have to work on this myself. good write, serenety! (((HUGS))) p.s.: check out my newest stories; think y'all will like 'em! :) |
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| Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) |
7/8/2003 |
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It's when we stare at the past that we step in a pile of poop. Always look forward, it makes for a brighter future (and cleaner shoes)
-James |
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| Reviewed by Amy Hodge (Reader) |
7/8/2003 |
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| I often think about this too. I wish I could! Just remember don't wish your life away!!! Good write! **Amy** |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
7/8/2003 |
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| Me too. You cut right to the heart of things. If only... |
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